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Array ( [sid] => 96420 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Yet so... [time] => 2005-05-31 21:08:43 [hometext] => i know i look fine but looks are deceiving.... [bodytext] =>
I am still young but yet I feel so old and aged
Wrinkling away inside like a dirty scrunched up page
I am still breathing but yet the air in my lungs is waning
The oxygen is poisonous causing reckless damage and paining

I am still smiling but yet tucked away inside there lies a frown
A private sick person who in her own madness will drown
I am righteous but yet so soaked in sin and ungodliness
Never to be forgiven though I live in regret and nakedness

I am so creative but yet my thoughts do quickly fade
Just sit here in denial around the emptiness I have made
I am so purposeful but yet so aimless as I wander
Fooling everyone as I secretly run through all darkness and yonder

I am so ***** happy but yet so strangely dejected
Every day I live is sad as joy my heart has swiftly rejected
I am stable but yet so close to suicidal
I am so mournful in black but yet so near to being bridal.
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 195 [topic] => 61 [informant] => pUnKa_RaCh [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )
Yet so...

Contributed by pUnKa_RaCh on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 09:08:43 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles




I am still young but yet I feel so old and aged
Wrinkling away inside like a dirty scrunched up page
I am still breathing but yet the air in my lungs is waning
The oxygen is poisonous causing reckless damage and paining

I am still smiling but yet tucked away inside there lies a frown
A private sick person who in her own madness will drown
I am righteous but yet so soaked in sin and ungodliness
Never to be forgiven though I live in regret and nakedness

I am so creative but yet my thoughts do quickly fade
Just sit here in denial around the emptiness I have made
I am so purposeful but yet so aimless as I wander
Fooling everyone as I secretly run through all darkness and yonder

I am so ***** happy but yet so strangely dejected
Every day I live is sad as joy my heart has swiftly rejected
I am stable but yet so close to suicidal
I am so mournful in black but yet so near to being bridal.




Copyright © pUnKa_RaCh ... [ 2005-05-31 21:08:43]
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Re: Yet so... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 10:13:10 PM AEST
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The good and bad...i love it


Re: Yet so... (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 10:24:51 PM AEST
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Yes that is what we call life.
good write.


Re: Yet so... (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 03:18:33 AM AEST
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Sad but very creative writing.
good work.
huggs,
emy


Re: Yet so... (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Wednesday, 1st June 2005 @ 08:54:01 AM AEST
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A tragic poem filled with so much emotion behind it. i love the way you wrote it. Well done.


Jane xx




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