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Array ( [sid] => 96096 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Simple Case of Mathamatics [time] => 2005-05-28 19:57:17 [hometext] => [bodytext] => A figment of my imagination
The heat residue
Builds up forcefully
Isolated tumors
Causing the blindness
The epidemic outbreak
Has begun to takeover...

The reality that stares you in the face
Speaks to you
And warns you
Of what will assuredly take place
Treat yourself kindly
And you can be saved
The adventure
Of a life-time
The adrenalin is
The drug we crave

First kisses and heartfelt wishes
Candle light picnics
What a romantic-
What a fanatic
No one can breathe the dirty air
All of us are
Asthmatics
It’s a simple case of mathamatics
When the looser wins the race
And the cake is eaten too
The devilish smile which graces
The next three miles
Your running shoes
Seem to be glued

To the ground you,
You are planted
To the sound
Your ear, stretches
The harmony that is found
In the pages,
Of the classics
The writers of the ages
And the composers
And the artists
While your sculptured face
Begins to rust
The restoration
Of the temple

The leader always leads
By example...

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Simple Case of Mathamatics

Contributed by jyssvw22 on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 07:57:17 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

A figment of my imagination
The heat residue
Builds up forcefully
Isolated tumors
Causing the blindness
The epidemic outbreak
Has begun to takeover...

The reality that stares you in the face
Speaks to you
And warns you
Of what will assuredly take place
Treat yourself kindly
And you can be saved
The adventure
Of a life-time
The adrenalin is
The drug we crave

First kisses and heartfelt wishes
Candle light picnics
What a romantic-
What a fanatic
No one can breathe the dirty air
All of us are
Asthmatics
It’s a simple case of mathamatics
When the looser wins the race
And the cake is eaten too
The devilish smile which graces
The next three miles
Your running shoes
Seem to be glued

To the ground you,
You are planted
To the sound
Your ear, stretches
The harmony that is found
In the pages,
Of the classics
The writers of the ages
And the composers
And the artists
While your sculptured face
Begins to rust
The restoration
Of the temple

The leader always leads
By example...

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Copyright Â© jyssvw22 ... [ 2005-05-28 19:57:17]
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Re: Simple Case of Mathamatics (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 10:37:19 PM AEST
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Wow Jyss, this is another good write...It really spoke to me. Keep up the awesome work.
Scorp.

Re: Simple Case of Mathamatics (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 11:40:32 PM AEST
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