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[title] => Head Games
[time] => 2005-05-28 14:36:53
[hometext] => *sigh*.....what to say.....well...
[bodytext] => Question: If You were here or I was there
do you think we'd even bother, or even really care?
Suitcases all around me, packed full of dirty deeds
a devil of denial; and on my soul he feeds
Marionettes pulling strings, dolls crying tears....
displays of joy and madness, and whispers of yet unspoken fears
The coach is calling out to me, but I don't wanna play
a dirty butt smoked---then discarded---left in a grubby ashtray
The whistle's blown, *head down in defeat*, this game is done
and oh yeah! Pssst! By the way; I think you know you won
I'm sorry; I just can't do this, I've shed too many tears
(and yet here you are....my heart silently cheers.)
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Head Games
Contributed by
hauntedscorp
on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 02:36:53 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Question: If You were here or I was there
do you think we'd even bother, or even really care?
Suitcases all around me, packed full of dirty deeds
a devil of denial; and on my soul he feeds
Marionettes pulling strings, dolls crying tears....
displays of joy and madness, and whispers of yet unspoken fears
The coach is calling out to me, but I don't wanna play
a dirty butt smoked---then discarded---left in a grubby ashtray
The whistle's blown, *head down in defeat*, this game is done
and oh yeah! Pssst! By the way; I think you know you won
I'm sorry; I just can't do this, I've shed too many tears
(and yet here you are....my heart silently cheers.)
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2005-05-28 14:36:53]
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Re: Head Games
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 02:55:07 PM AEST
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| Oh scorp, I am so familiar with these types of emotions (by now). It's so frustrating with the positives of a relationship don't make up for the negatives of what happens to you when it's just not... going on, but the positives are so addicting. :-/ Anyway you portrayed it wonderfully, so well that it certainly brought back those sorts of feelings in memory. Cheers! J. |
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Re: Head Games
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by jyssvw22 on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 03:00:45 PM AEST
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hey scorp, nice write of course, your emotions were well captured.
i really loved this piece, thanks for sharing |
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Re: Head Games
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by MorningDove on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 03:50:30 PM AEST
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Oh how well I know these games. I detest them. I think for some they become obsessive and enjoyable. I only enjoy truth in a relationship and have learned to accept nothing but. Games in love are for children. I quit a long time ago. Cold turkey. Powerful write.
Strength,
Rita |
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Re: Head Games
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 04:10:30 PM AEST
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WoooHooo!! Well written scorp!!!
Each line a story in and of itself...put together in an incredible way! |
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Re: Head Games
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by somedaylove on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 04:20:02 PM AEST
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| wow very powerful, well writen........those games people play without regards to ones heart so sad yet true..........keep up the wondeful writing |
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Re: Head Games
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by xXx_Fem_Fatale_xXx on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 04:21:01 PM AEST
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Very lovely and recognisably written. An relationship that really isnt going anywhere but is yet so comfortable, can be very consuming. Tho we know it isnt good for us but yet we stick around....
The miracles of love ma dear, it moves where ever it wants to go while we wish it didnt go there.
Wonderfully captured.
hugss,
Nats
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Re: Head Games
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by brokenwings on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 07:56:34 PM AEST
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well i don't know what to say but this was good i liked it very much
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Re: Head Games
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by DorianChambers on
Saturday, 28th May 2005 @ 09:44:07 PM AEST
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A compelling peice of poetry nice flow 2 it as
well as between the lines revealations . . .
Ben
aka. Dorian Chambers |
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Re: Head Games
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 12th June 2005 @ 03:27:52 AM AEST
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| Oh yes, people and their head games. Glad I don't know anyone like that anymore. If I do meet up with those kinds now, it's basically a short good-bye...thank you...please go away now. Anyway, another awesome write from the Scorp!!! :) |
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Re: Head Games
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th February 2015 @ 12:14:19 AM AEST
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First, see? I can do it too. Nanner nanner poo poo. I randomly chose an old one and picked this one because the title...just like the Foreigner song.
At least reading this it makes me feel not so weird. Yeah, I can so relate to the I just can't do this but then that damn heart silently cheering itself away. Damn heart!!!
Nice stuff here, Scorpendous One. |
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