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Array ( [sid] => 95998 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => It just got worse [time] => 2005-05-27 19:16:19 [hometext] => crap [bodytext] => uh oh I think it just got worse
I was just sad before
but now.. .ugg I know

I should really try harder
not to feel the feeling I feel
it could be bad...

I wish I didnt feel this way
would make me not as confused
but as it is I do

I have no idea how to deal
I've never been in this situation before
and now I know why

well actually similar but...
i was never on this side
of all of this *****

and when it happened before
the one on my side won
I didn't

so does this mean I will do this?
but to hurt the other
i can't go through with this

but ahh i dont know how I feel
but I know how he feels
and it doesn't include me

Well thats just my luck
how will I work it?
for now I am sticking it out [comments] => 3 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 33 [informant] => spazz911 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )
It just got worse

Contributed by spazz911 on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 07:16:19 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove



uh oh I think it just got worse
I was just sad before
but now.. .ugg I know

I should really try harder
not to feel the feeling I feel
it could be bad...

I wish I didnt feel this way
would make me not as confused
but as it is I do

I have no idea how to deal
I've never been in this situation before
and now I know why

well actually similar but...
i was never on this side
of all of this *****

and when it happened before
the one on my side won
I didn't

so does this mean I will do this?
but to hurt the other
i can't go through with this

but ahh i dont know how I feel
but I know how he feels
and it doesn't include me

Well thats just my luck
how will I work it?
for now I am sticking it out




Copyright © spazz911 ... [ 2005-05-27 19:16:19]
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Re: It just got worse (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 07:26:05 PM AEST
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Things usually have a way of working themselves out for the better in the end, so hang in there! Interesting poem; keeps the reader guessing....
Scorp.


Re: It just got worse (User Rating: 1 )
by sprinter27 on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 08:47:23 PM AEST
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yeah... good poem. and if i'm getting this the right way... i feel like it too. sorry, kc. it should work out. if you, jennie and i stick together through this.... i'm sure it will get better. there has to be a reason for all the crap we each (individually and together) have gone through. we just got to stick together til the end. keep up the good work!

~sprints


Re: It just got worse (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Monday, 30th May 2005 @ 01:34:57 AM AEST
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KC, I think love is the most confusing emotion. It doesn't play by any kind of consistent rules, unlike feat, let's say, that is more predicatble (but less enjoyable). As someone who has messed up the love thing pretty much all my life, I don't have any intelligent advice. All I know is that when you open your heart to love, there is the chance of great pain or great reward. Which is why I have tried in the past to avoid it! That's not advice, though. I have tried opening up these days, and sometimes I get pain and sometimes I (unintentionally) deliver it. Love is the craziest thing.
Well, if he isn't including you, he obviously is overlooking something. Hope things work out, stay strong
Jaycee




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