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Array ( [sid] => 95982 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => As Good For You? [time] => 2005-05-27 15:46:09 [hometext] => Written February 24, 2005. [bodytext] => I felt it.
that night.
her fear.
pain.
desperation.
heart-break.
so loudly.
echoes.
in dark.
I feel it.
it hurts.
so much.
so strong.
pulse racing.
heart beats.
quick.
quicker.
quickest.
so fast.
won’t stop.
can’t.
s. l. o. w. d o w n.
now tears.
so hot.
they sting
like ice.
why doesn’t it end?
why won’t he stop?
please.
it hurts.
Just stop it!
Stop!
You’re hurting her!
no more.
please.
please?!
you’re ruining her life.
can’t you see?
what you’re doing to her?
fire.
in your eyes.
while she crumbles like pottery.
she’s torn now.
because of you.
bleeding.
but you won’t stop.
You. Just. Keep. Going.
on and on.
‘til your release.
feel it there?
in the pit of your belly?
building.
from your toes.
tingling.
to your knees.
up.
up.
up.
more. more. more.
‘til you burst
with a sigh.
and one last whimper
from the girl you destroyed.
I saw it!
I feel it!
she’s hurting.
she’s hurting.
and all you say is
“was it good for you?”

Okay.
This is based on a nightmare I had.
But feel free to perceive it however you will. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 75 [informant] => blackmarker [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

As Good For You?

Contributed by blackmarker on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 03:46:09 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

I felt it.
that night.
her fear.
pain.
desperation.
heart-break.
so loudly.
echoes.
in dark.
I feel it.
it hurts.
so much.
so strong.
pulse racing.
heart beats.
quick.
quicker.
quickest.
so fast.
won’t stop.
can’t.
s. l. o. w. d o w n.
now tears.
so hot.
they sting
like ice.
why doesn’t it end?
why won’t he stop?
please.
it hurts.
Just stop it!
Stop!
You’re hurting her!
no more.
please.
please?!
you’re ruining her life.
can’t you see?
what you’re doing to her?
fire.
in your eyes.
while she crumbles like pottery.
she’s torn now.
because of you.
bleeding.
but you won’t stop.
You. Just. Keep. Going.
on and on.
‘til your release.
feel it there?
in the pit of your belly?
building.
from your toes.
tingling.
to your knees.
up.
up.
up.
more. more. more.
‘til you burst
with a sigh.
and one last whimper
from the girl you destroyed.
I saw it!
I feel it!
she’s hurting.
she’s hurting.
and all you say is
“was it good for you?”

Okay.
This is based on a nightmare I had.
But feel free to perceive it however you will.

Copyright Â© blackmarker ... [ 2005-05-27 15:46:09]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: As Good For You? (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 27th May 2005 @ 05:12:11 PM AEST
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This was really good, and I'm glad it was just a nightmare...! Very well-written.
Scorp.

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