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With pain it pulls
As it cuts to my heart
It pulls at my soul
And rips me apart
For darker I fall
And darker I see
As my life falls down
From all around me
My eyes get tight
Form all my grief
As I feels my rage
Its hard to breath
It might be to late
For my faith is weak

For The End Is Near

As I look at my life
I’m lost to it all
What is the answer
Why do I fall
Death is the door
To release from it all
For my minds turned dark
And my souls grown weak
As I contemplate
Losing all my grief
So I’ll take my life
And I’ll take my grief
And welcome my death
For my heart is weak

The End Is Here

“Death Is Just The Sweeter Side Of Life”
~Steve~

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Death Is Life

Contributed by sride686 on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 12:53:05 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

With pain it pulls
As it cuts to my heart
It pulls at my soul
And rips me apart
For darker I fall
And darker I see
As my life falls down
From all around me
My eyes get tight
Form all my grief
As I feels my rage
Its hard to breath
It might be to late
For my faith is weak

For The End Is Near

As I look at my life
I’m lost to it all
What is the answer
Why do I fall
Death is the door
To release from it all
For my minds turned dark
And my souls grown weak
As I contemplate
Losing all my grief
So I’ll take my life
And I’ll take my grief
And welcome my death
For my heart is weak

The End Is Here

“Death Is Just The Sweeter Side Of Life”
~Steve~

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Re: Death Is Life (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 01:00:47 PM AEST
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so forlorn and sad. Hang in there my friend come home safe

Hugssss
Michelle

Re: Death Is Life (User Rating: 1 )
by bethers_is_my_baby on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 01:21:14 PM AEST
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great poem!! i can so relate to this! :) great job!

*~peace and love~*

*~Amanda Hope~*

Re: Death Is Life (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 03:07:08 PM AEST
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A very dark and sorrowful write... I like it! Every emotion seems to be tumbling into the darkness... I especially take to the lines:

For darker i fall
and darker i see
As my life falls down
From all around me

Very nice and well put together. These last few poems have been different in the best of ways as i read them. Keep up the good work, as always, i will look forward to the next. dw

Re: Death Is Life (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 10:47:14 AM AEST
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thats so sad *sheds a tear*
u are a brilliant poet and you write these words from a place and time so full of perel... i wish u the best my frend, im here for you. cum home safe, you're in my thoughts.
luv n hugs,
jennie*

Re: Death Is Life (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 02:33:20 PM AEST
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That was great. I can really feel the pain you're in. The loneliness you feel. Great piece.

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