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Array ( [sid] => 95346 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Alone [time] => 2005-05-22 13:49:46 [hometext] => No Words to say my heart is just hurting tonight over here....Steve [bodytext] =>

Well I just wrote this setting here at night can’t get to sleep write now and I realize that I have no one I want to call right now. My heart is crying out for someone to hold. This may not be to good for it was written fast but it is hurt at its best lost in words of pain. Hope you all are doing better then this….Steve

I’m cry right now
The tears they fall
My eyes turn red
I’m lost to it all
My life a mess
With so much pain
I’m at fault
And I’m to blame
Why wont it leave
My hurt inside
Why do I always
Mess up my life
I find a love
And it walks away
Why wont my love
Just for one day stay
Now I write my words
For its my pain
I need to get out
Before I go insane
I’m alone
No one to hold
I need a hug
I need a kiss
I need a love
With eternal bliss
Alone over here
My life is dark
What is the answer
And were went
my heart

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Alone

Contributed by sride686 on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 01:49:46 PM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

Well I just wrote this setting here at night can’t get to sleep write now and I realize that I have no one I want to call right now. My heart is crying out for someone to hold. This may not be to good for it was written fast but it is hurt at its best lost in words of pain. Hope you all are doing better then this….Steve

I’m cry right now
The tears they fall
My eyes turn red
I’m lost to it all
My life a mess
With so much pain
I’m at fault
And I’m to blame
Why wont it leave
My hurt inside
Why do I always
Mess up my life
I find a love
And it walks away
Why wont my love
Just for one day stay
Now I write my words
For its my pain
I need to get out
Before I go insane
I’m alone
No one to hold
I need a hug
I need a kiss
I need a love
With eternal bliss
Alone over here
My life is dark
What is the answer
And were went
my heart

Copyright Â© sride686 ... [ 2005-05-22 13:49:46]
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Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by mylady on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 02:15:47 PM AEST
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yea .When you are to far the lonely-ness creep in make your heart hurt wanting to feel
a hug or having some one . The poem is sad
here a hug from me take care.. =)

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 03:12:55 PM AEST
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so deep and insightful..
Hope you find the strength to heal your heart
Sending you a hug {{{}}}
~~~Michelle~~~

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by poet70 on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 03:46:28 PM AEST
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Being alone can be a painful thing, sure isn't a good place to be, I feel your pain, and am sorry that you are in such pain and are so alone, I hope and pray things turns around for you, you deserve, it, you seem like A real good person, and love will find it's way to you and being lonely will hopefully God willing end and end soon for you Steve.
Tammi

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by XxNights_ChildxX on Sunday, 22nd May 2005 @ 04:24:44 PM AEST
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awww I know the feeling :(
*super big hug* lol great poem

Jenni xxoo

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 12:18:00 AM AEST
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Steve I can so much feel ur pain through ur words my dear friend. It's usually at night u feel it the most when that special somebody is not there to hold u tight and make it all right. You're in my heart and prayers my dear friend. As always u write with such depth and emotion. Talent that shines from the heart. Your words always speak the truth. God bless u and keep u safe.
A lifetime of never ending heartfelt hugs for u my dear friend.
Love always,
~sue~

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 10:10:48 AM AEST
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It was a sad poem but most of the time it feels lonely over here. You get so sick of just being around soldiers and having know one their with you when you lay down at night. Times are hard with so much pain around us but I know its just a short moment in a life time so I’ll make it through. But I’m doing okay and its great to get a comment from you and it helps to know someone enjoys my writes. Take care and thank you again….Steve

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 10:34:12 AM AEST
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aww i know it must be lonely but you can always talk to me. you're in my thoughts.
*gives steve extremely amazing hug*
luv n more hugs,
jennie*

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Thursday, 16th June 2005 @ 02:29:16 PM AEST
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That was very good. It's horrible feeling lonely like that. I'm so sorry. You are an amazing poet!

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