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Kicking over minor pebbles never attempting to remove the stone
The placebo effect has mislead you to believe that you are really here
The world that spins before your eyes is no longer artificially flat, but a sphere
In the laboratory of scientific mistrust and in the flowery garden of lust
The proprietors who claim ownership of us, we quickly distrust

One man captures the bullet that rides across his scalp in mid-air
He has not grown weary of a trick he learned in his last love-affair
A sailor who is braving the storm that had originated a world apart
He and his shipmates, battle the winds and crashing waves, just to have a second start
The dagger which penetrates the epidemical divide, has slit the flesh of his hand
The Judge of passed judgments, raging at his misfortune as the wound expands

A modification is needed, to align the plants which have drifted
A reauthorization of a gravitational law, a genius outwitted
The push over person, who hops on one toe, everywhere he goes
Has finally been repositioned in such a way he begins to flow
Complicating the issue, a man rewrites the formula to salvation, however pretentious
Furthering the incitements that taint the efforts of the heroes, and their heroicness


.......
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Placebo Effect

Contributed by jyssvw22 on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 12:09:25 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



Never ending tirades that reach as far as your ear and as near as my own
Kicking over minor pebbles never attempting to remove the stone
The placebo effect has mislead you to believe that you are really here
The world that spins before your eyes is no longer artificially flat, but a sphere
In the laboratory of scientific mistrust and in the flowery garden of lust
The proprietors who claim ownership of us, we quickly distrust

One man captures the bullet that rides across his scalp in mid-air
He has not grown weary of a trick he learned in his last love-affair
A sailor who is braving the storm that had originated a world apart
He and his shipmates, battle the winds and crashing waves, just to have a second start
The dagger which penetrates the epidemical divide, has slit the flesh of his hand
The Judge of passed judgments, raging at his misfortune as the wound expands

A modification is needed, to align the plants which have drifted
A reauthorization of a gravitational law, a genius outwitted
The push over person, who hops on one toe, everywhere he goes
Has finally been repositioned in such a way he begins to flow
Complicating the issue, a man rewrites the formula to salvation, however pretentious
Furthering the incitements that taint the efforts of the heroes, and their heroicness


.......
.....







Copyright © jyssvw22 ... [ 2005-05-21 12:09:25]
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Re: Placebo Effect (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 12:21:31 PM AEST
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A very nice peice of poetic craftsmanship, an

illustrious diversion in to the preditory soul of

the human species, an enjoyable read . . .


Dorian Chambers


Re: Placebo Effect (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 04:27:21 PM AEST
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Hey jyss, This poem started with a bang and stayed strong throughout. This was a very enjoyable read, and leaves the reader to ponder your wonderfully well-worded poem...
Scorp.




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