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Array ( [sid] => 95110 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => A great love [time] => 2005-05-20 10:08:09 [hometext] => [bodytext] => If I was someone,
Then I would love no one,
For he is my true one,
The moon to my sun.
My heart skips a beat,
My eyes fill with tears,
Each day I lay thinking,
Of the coming years.
Could life be so grand?
That our fates intertwine,
A sweet kiss from destiny,
Brought his heart to mine.
It’s now my greatest prayer,
That his happiness exceeds,
As I fill him with love,
Nothing more will I need.
God grant me this prayer,
This lofty request,
And I swear I’ll die trying,
To make him feel blessed.
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A great love

Contributed by dtborchert on Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 10:08:09 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

If I was someone,
Then I would love no one,
For he is my true one,
The moon to my sun.
My heart skips a beat,
My eyes fill with tears,
Each day I lay thinking,
Of the coming years.
Could life be so grand?
That our fates intertwine,
A sweet kiss from destiny,
Brought his heart to mine.
It’s now my greatest prayer,
That his happiness exceeds,
As I fill him with love,
Nothing more will I need.
God grant me this prayer,
This lofty request,
And I swear I’ll die trying,
To make him feel blessed.

Copyright Â© dtborchert ... [ 2005-05-20 10:08:09]
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Re: A great love (User Rating: 1 )
by poet70 on Friday, 20th May 2005 @ 01:11:24 PM AEST
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I really loved it, and how you prayed to God, bringing God into poems for me is always a nice touch, it is Good to do that for God's sake, well any ways, you really drew me in on this poem,loved it allot. Tammi

Re: A great love (User Rating: 1 )
by blowfish_jane on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 02:10:12 AM AEST
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Tena, this was really beautiful. I love the simplicity of the poem.

Great write.

Jane xxx

Re: A great love (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 01:15:09 PM AEST
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The person you wrote this for must be a very great love indeed, the passion oozes from every letter every sylable and every word.
A great love and a great work of art, this piece is an inspiration.

Johnny.

Re: A great love (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Saturday, 13th August 2005 @ 04:49:07 AM AEST
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"Love or romantic poetry" is the perfect category for this, I think. I could easily be a romantic piece intended for a significant other - or - a poem of love and hope for the beautiful baby that you have in your arms in the picture on your profile. Regardless of how you intended it, it is lovely. And... your "him" is so very blessed that you love him so.

Well done -
~Snemmy

Re: A great love (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 16th January 2006 @ 10:28:47 PM AEST
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This is really a precious write......
I am sure he feels blessed..
Jenni

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