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Array ( [sid] => 9501 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Beginning of Us [time] => 2002-12-31 03:00:00 [hometext] => This is the story of how my boyfriend, Andrew, and I met. We met while taking tennis lessons, and in a way our coach set us up. It has been the best year of my life! [bodytext] => It was the first day of tennis
Lessons started at four
I knew I was late
When I walked though the door

The first thing I noticed
Was you standing there
I was hooked from the start
I couldn't help but to stare

I wanted your number
So that I could call
I knew I had to have you
Becuase you had it all

So I talked to our coach
Right after you'd gone
He got me your number
And I thought "right on"!

A few weeks later
We had started to talk
You asked if I'd go out
And I suddely started to gawk

I was thrilled
That this beautiful boy
Had started to like me
It bought me such joy

From the movies to the dance
We've gone on many dates
Each one was a pleasure
I know all to come will be great

You are so good to me
That's why were still together
I know this love will last
I hope this is forever

[comments] => 1 [counter] => 194 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Lauren [notes] => [ihome] => 1 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
The Beginning of Us

Contributed by Lauren on Tuesday, 31st December 2002 @ 03:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



It was the first day of tennis
Lessons started at four
I knew I was late
When I walked though the door

The first thing I noticed
Was you standing there
I was hooked from the start
I couldn't help but to stare

I wanted your number
So that I could call
I knew I had to have you
Becuase you had it all

So I talked to our coach
Right after you'd gone
He got me your number
And I thought "right on"!

A few weeks later
We had started to talk
You asked if I'd go out
And I suddely started to gawk

I was thrilled
That this beautiful boy
Had started to like me
It bought me such joy

From the movies to the dance
We've gone on many dates
Each one was a pleasure
I know all to come will be great

You are so good to me
That's why were still together
I know this love will last
I hope this is forever





Copyright © Lauren ... [ 2002-12-31 03:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: The Beginning of Us (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 1st January 2003 @ 04:09:14 PM AEST
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nice poem about us. lol. i love you. love me




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