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Array ( [sid] => 94922 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => One More Kiss [time] => 2005-05-18 19:53:33 [hometext] => [bodytext] => can you kiss me please just one more time
let me feel your heart beat next to mine
i miss the way things used to be
i miss the ways you used to hold me

what i want more than anything
is to have you by my side
for it again to be the two of us
and not just you and i

do i even have a chance
of winning back your heart
if so please tell me what to do
please tell me where to start

it hurts to be away from you
but it hurts to see you too
all these emotions confuse me so
please tell me what to do

so i need to know now
cause my soul is dying
should i just give up
or keep on trying?

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato

[comments] => 5 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 22 [informant] => bethers_is_my_baby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

One More Kiss

Contributed by bethers_is_my_baby on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 07:53:33 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

can you kiss me please just one more time
let me feel your heart beat next to mine
i miss the way things used to be
i miss the ways you used to hold me

what i want more than anything
is to have you by my side
for it again to be the two of us
and not just you and i

do i even have a chance
of winning back your heart
if so please tell me what to do
please tell me where to start

it hurts to be away from you
but it hurts to see you too
all these emotions confuse me so
please tell me what to do

so i need to know now
cause my soul is dying
should i just give up
or keep on trying?

Copyright ©2005 Amanda Hope Indelicato

Copyright Â© bethers_is_my_baby ... [ 2005-05-18 19:53:33]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: One More Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by Fears on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 07:55:22 PM AEST
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wow..that is really deep and meaning full, I like it alot!

Re: One More Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by emokid on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 08:33:58 PM AEST
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I write on this a lot and understand it keep writing you're good

Ian the emokid

Re: One More Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by brokenwings on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 09:25:33 PM AEST
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normally i cry when i write not when i read but i'm crying now, these are words i wish i could say to the love i lost.. thank you this was beautiful... good write

Re: One More Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 11:53:10 AM AEST
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This was very beautiful. It was very meaningful and very well written. great job. I felt emotions stir inside myself.

blessed be
christina

Re: One More Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by somedaylove on Thursday, 19th May 2005 @ 04:29:17 PM AEST
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wow amazing i felt your words...............gl time will tell all i wish you the best ..............great write keep it up

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