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[aid] => mick
[title] => If God Was Real
[time] => 2005-05-18 14:38:37
[hometext] => Another atheistic poem I've written, but this time right on the spot so I'm sure there are some flaws...
[bodytext] => And like my last poem I've posted, take this for what you will... just my personal views... not saying anyone else's are wrong, I've always said whatever you believe in is real as long as you believe in it.... the poem gets a little trite around the third stanza but this was all written in like 5-10 minutes... I could use some feedback and perhaps a better title... If God was real He'd send you a sign A sign you'd find at the end of time But God's not real He was just a lie A lie you hide in the back of your mind Cry if you will You are in the dark A dark so sharp that'll tear you apart And cry you will Right out of your heart Your heart departs back way before the start Your God is gone Now ain't that a trip A trip that rips right clean out of your grip Is your God gone? Heard it from your lips Those lips that spit such blasphemous bulls--- Is your God dead Or is it a fake A fake to make your entire earth quake Your God is dead So now save some face A face disgraced from your very own faith [comments] => 2 [counter] => 160 [topic] => 11 [informant] => heartquake [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ChristianPoetry )
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