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Array ( [sid] => 94799 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Am Dead [time] => 2005-05-17 21:18:36 [hometext] => plastic and real [bodytext] => Lightning against the black sky
Stones tilting helter skelter
Tree leaves wind striped of life
Soaked somewhere left to dry

Thunder rattles the heaven
Booming echoes between the stones
No rest for the dead
Worms float on pavement

Muddy water soaks the ground
Flower pettles plastic and real
Scurring across a stone covered
pasture
That horrible dripping in my tomb

The constant driping a continuled taunt
Within this vault my casket lies
On my back facing up
Evil spirits me reason to haunt

Here I lie year after year
My flesh had been eaten away
Pieces of clothes and my rotting
bones
Worms craw in worms craw out my sockets ware

I have seen demons from hell
I cannot plead I need your prayer
A day is like a thousand years
Demons come from the under world

Teasing teasing always screeching
I am dead they tempt no more
Gnawing taring at whatevers left
Up above still the raining

Blown flowers cover the earth
Plastic and real
No one knows what goes on below
My bones scattered in this muddy filth

How long have I lied in wait
Pray you for my soul
A thousand years is but a day
Judgement day I wish to be at His gate

Sinned








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I Am Dead

Contributed by sinned on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 09:18:36 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Lightning against the black sky
Stones tilting helter skelter
Tree leaves wind striped of life
Soaked somewhere left to dry

Thunder rattles the heaven
Booming echoes between the stones
No rest for the dead
Worms float on pavement

Muddy water soaks the ground
Flower pettles plastic and real
Scurring across a stone covered
pasture
That horrible dripping in my tomb

The constant driping a continuled taunt
Within this vault my casket lies
On my back facing up
Evil spirits me reason to haunt

Here I lie year after year
My flesh had been eaten away
Pieces of clothes and my rotting
bones
Worms craw in worms craw out my sockets ware

I have seen demons from hell
I cannot plead I need your prayer
A day is like a thousand years
Demons come from the under world

Teasing teasing always screeching
I am dead they tempt no more
Gnawing taring at whatevers left
Up above still the raining

Blown flowers cover the earth
Plastic and real
No one knows what goes on below
My bones scattered in this muddy filth

How long have I lied in wait
Pray you for my soul
A thousand years is but a day
Judgement day I wish to be at His gate

Sinned












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Re: I Am Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 02:50:26 AM AEST
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Great writing as always.
huggs,
emy


Re: I Am Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 06:27:30 AM AEST
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Dennis this is a thought provoking piece of poetry captured so well with ur talented skill in writing. A truly remarkable poem .
*hugs*
~sue~


Re: I Am Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Gimpie on Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 03:02:53 PM AEST
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wow....this is really thought provoking....I love it. You are really good at capturing things in your writing...I can't wait to read more from you :)
Your friend,
Jes


Re: I Am Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by darkangeleyes57 on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 12:04:16 PM AEST
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well written and very good. great job. I liked it.

christina


Re: I Am Dead (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 13th June 2005 @ 12:45:25 AM AEST
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Ha! A wonderful write. Your words captured my attention and grasped my emotions.
Excellent as always.

Keep writing
Keep smiling
sweetstranger




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