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I feel like I am walking on eggshells.
I feel like a dumbbell.
I feel like I am In hell.
Cause All I do Is get yelled at.
I wished sometimes I was In a clamshell.
I wished I could go to a hotel.
My life Is nothing but getting yelled at.
I heard the doorbell.
And then I got yelled at.
I fell down cause I got yelled at.
I misspell when I get yelled at.
So I am always walking on eggshells. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 191 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Butterflygirl40 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

Yell.

Contributed by Butterflygirl40 on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 10:42:30 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Everyday I get yelled at.
I feel like I am walking on eggshells.
I feel like a dumbbell.
I feel like I am In hell.
Cause All I do Is get yelled at.
I wished sometimes I was In a clamshell.
I wished I could go to a hotel.
My life Is nothing but getting yelled at.
I heard the doorbell.
And then I got yelled at.
I fell down cause I got yelled at.
I misspell when I get yelled at.
So I am always walking on eggshells.

Copyright Â© Butterflygirl40 ... [ 2005-05-16 22:42:30]
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Re: Yell. (User Rating: 1 )
by Butterflygirl40 on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 07:34:59 AM AEST
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come on people i know you read my poem but no comment it cant be that bad now can it lol ... plzzzzzzzzz comment me!@!!!

Re: Yell. (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Tuesday, 17th May 2005 @ 08:42:27 AM AEST
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Hay their you’ll get your comments just keep writing and know I enjoy your writes. Your style is very different but I can tell you write about the truth in your life. How old are you if you don’t mind me asking. Also don’t put up with being treated this way. Take care and hope to hear from you….Steve

Re: Yell. (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 03:10:56 AM AEST
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patience
you will get your comments

Re: Yell. (User Rating: 1 )
by Fears on Tuesday, 24th May 2005 @ 09:29:57 AM AEST
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this was different, but a good write. I like how you say that you are walking on egg shels like walking on hot coals. Getting yelled at is horrible. and i get yelled at alot. I hope that your egg shells will finally vanish.

Keep Writing.

~Fears

Re: Yell. (User Rating: 1 )
by shutterfly2004 on Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 12:58:33 AM AEST
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This was a really good Poem!!

Re: Yell. (User Rating: 1 )
by JockPhillips on Thursday, 2nd August 2007 @ 12:29:13 PM AEST
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Jock Phillips too.

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