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Array ( [sid] => 94591 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Words From My Bleeding Heart [time] => 2005-05-16 14:44:47 [hometext] => wasn't sure how to classify this one.... [bodytext] => Hello, my beautiful friend.
I have but one question
To give you:
Do you know how, exactly,
I feel about you,
About what's going on?
Let me give you a hint.
I hurt.
More and more every second
Of everyday.
You know I love you,
You've told me you can see it
In my eyes,
And I used to see it in yours.
What happened?
I think you're just afraid,
I pray you're just afraid,
To let me know,
To let me see.
I keep doing things
To show you my love,
As gestures of friendship,
But so often,
I and what I do
Go unnoticed.
You no longer acknowledge
My love when I speak it
Unto your, at times, deaf ears.
You constantly how me so confused,
All I can do
Is kill myself with alcohol.
God, how many times
Have I poisoned my body
Making myself drunk
To try and forget about you.
I think you're lucky
That your precious friend
Was there to take the knife away.
Why can't you make up your mind?
Do you care about me
Or not?
I can't stand this anymore,
Not knowing.
Your actions,
What you show me about how you feel,
Changes more than a politician's campaign issues.
Come on, baby.
You know actions speak louder than words.
I'm tired of doing and doing for you,
Only for you to spit in my face.
That's how I feel.
Oh, one more thing,
I love you. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 165 [topic] => 25 [informant] => solmyr1404 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => MiscPoems )

Words From My Bleeding Heart

Contributed by solmyr1404 on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 02:44:47 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

Hello, my beautiful friend.
I have but one question
To give you:
Do you know how, exactly,
I feel about you,
About what's going on?
Let me give you a hint.
I hurt.
More and more every second
Of everyday.
You know I love you,
You've told me you can see it
In my eyes,
And I used to see it in yours.
What happened?
I think you're just afraid,
I pray you're just afraid,
To let me know,
To let me see.
I keep doing things
To show you my love,
As gestures of friendship,
But so often,
I and what I do
Go unnoticed.
You no longer acknowledge
My love when I speak it
Unto your, at times, deaf ears.
You constantly how me so confused,
All I can do
Is kill myself with alcohol.
God, how many times
Have I poisoned my body
Making myself drunk
To try and forget about you.
I think you're lucky
That your precious friend
Was there to take the knife away.
Why can't you make up your mind?
Do you care about me
Or not?
I can't stand this anymore,
Not knowing.
Your actions,
What you show me about how you feel,
Changes more than a politician's campaign issues.
Come on, baby.
You know actions speak louder than words.
I'm tired of doing and doing for you,
Only for you to spit in my face.
That's how I feel.
Oh, one more thing,
I love you.

Copyright © solmyr1404 ... [ 2005-05-16 14:44:47]
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Re: Words From My Bleeding Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Zeldianus on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 04:02:59 PM AEST
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this is so sad! i have been exactly where you have and i know how terrible it can be. i hope things go better for you than they did for me.

Seth

Re: Words From My Bleeding Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by kailadragon on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 04:17:31 PM AEST
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dag bro.......that's not good.....i wish i could help you.....just hang in there and put your faith in God...he'll show you the way out, trust him and he'll show you the way..lulots......*hug*

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