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one must remember this:

It doesnt matter pain or strife or
embodiment of bliss

It only matters how you go
through every winding turn,

how you live who you love
and every thing you learn

so find and ride the path you chose
'till heartbeat's nevermore...

one precious moment's not to lose
is what we travel for. [comments] => 9 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Man_On_High [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

some advice...

Contributed by Man_On_High on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 11:14:50 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

...when traveling the road of life
one must remember this:

It doesnt matter pain or strife or
embodiment of bliss

It only matters how you go
through every winding turn,

how you live who you love
and every thing you learn

so find and ride the path you chose
'till heartbeat's nevermore...

one precious moment's not to lose
is what we travel for.

Copyright © Man_On_High ... [ 2005-05-13 23:14:50]
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Re: some advice... (User Rating: 1 )
by MorningDove on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 11:38:34 PM AEST
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Some excellent advice. As I have walked my long path of life I have found each of these thoughts to be truisms. Takes walking that path and making the mistakes to learn them usually.

Peace,
Rita

Re: some advice... (User Rating: 1 )
by Kyarn on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 04:04:52 AM AEST
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Good advice and great flow.

Re: some advice... (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 02:25:15 PM AEST
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your quite the poet yourself this is poetry nice

peice of writting . . .

Dorian Chambers

Re: some advice... (User Rating: 1 )
by dark_descent on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 04:36:24 PM AEST
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This is a great write; it flows perfectly and has a very clear message. Very impressive.

Jen x

Re: some advice... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 14th May 2005 @ 10:17:17 PM AEST
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fantastic advice ,,so much said with so few words ,,I really liked this ,,

Re: some advice... (User Rating: 1 )
by nanb294eva on Thursday, 23rd June 2005 @ 03:40:56 PM AEST
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Billy
this is the one
the one that had me
the first time i read this
i knew i was in love
you knew what i was
going through and wrote
this for me
for that i loved you
love you
nancy
ps people this helped me through a very hard time this is some good
ADVICE

Re: some advice... (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Friday, 1st July 2005 @ 05:12:25 PM AEST
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My favourite of all your poems I've read...
Excellent advice..you are quite a wise man...as well as a talented poet!!
Jenni

Re: some advice... (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Thursday, 7th July 2005 @ 08:19:24 PM AEST
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excellently written advice...i especially like the 5th stanza

wiz

Re: some advice... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 2nd August 2006 @ 06:20:18 PM AEST
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Billy~
so exquisitely put .. your enlightenment never fails to impress
or warm this heart. This piece, perfect in it's conception, is
so incredibly simple, yet immensely profound. 'Tis
sad that so few learn to live by wise words such as these.

this part especially touched me ..

"how you live who you love
and every thing you learn"

I find strong meaning there, dear heart.

ever humbled .. and moved ..

~Breezy

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