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Array ( [sid] => 94307 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Way You Make Me Feel [time] => 2005-05-13 20:59:54 [hometext] => I wrote this about some of the men that have made a *Great* impact on my life! [bodytext] => The pain inside is so great,
I can't hold it in, I can't hold back the hate!
All the pain you put me through,
I slit my wrists because of you.
The blood just runs to the floor,
I love to see it pour.
As I bled the tears well up in my eyes,
I can't help but feel so despised.
When I see you I start to shake,
My teeth crings, my stomach aches.
I'm sure I'm not the only one,
Who you made feel so wrong,
Because I never said NO!
You thought it was okay to go,
All the way down my pants,
You did not even give me a glance.
You only wanted what was below,
I hate you for making me feel so low.
Trust me it will never happen again,
I am cutting now this is the end. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 39 [informant] => Deep_Within_My_Heart [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

The Way You Make Me Feel

Contributed by Deep_Within_My_Heart on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 08:59:54 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

The pain inside is so great,
I can't hold it in, I can't hold back the hate!
All the pain you put me through,
I slit my wrists because of you.
The blood just runs to the floor,
I love to see it pour.
As I bled the tears well up in my eyes,
I can't help but feel so despised.
When I see you I start to shake,
My teeth crings, my stomach aches.
I'm sure I'm not the only one,
Who you made feel so wrong,
Because I never said NO!
You thought it was okay to go,
All the way down my pants,
You did not even give me a glance.
You only wanted what was below,
I hate you for making me feel so low.
Trust me it will never happen again,
I am cutting now this is the end.

Copyright © Deep_Within_My_Heart ... [ 2005-05-13 20:59:54]
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Re: The Way You Make Me Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by grin69 on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 11:02:18 PM AEST
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When I've felt this way , I put my tennis shoes on and ran! I ran all the way to the park and screamed and yelled at GOD. (this was about 2:00 a.m) When I got up off my knees and turned around, all these DUCKS were staring at me!! I laughed pretty hard. I guess what I'm saying is, excercising helps me when things get to be too much, also watching the queens of comedy or other stand up comedy makes me feel better. Praying for you.

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