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Could hardly open my eyes
Because my head hurt so much
Crying myself to sleep has done something
I cant help it
I just cant
Its too much for a girl like me
Just me
Why does this have to be
Im sick of it all
I cant catch myself everytime I fall
Im gonna pull the trigger for the last time
Yes
I am weak
Yes
Im a coward
Im a loser
I lost this game called life
Im dumb
For everything I've ever done
I wont feel like ***** anymore
I will close my eyes permently
Never to wake
Laughing and smiling I will no longer have to fake
For this is my life
For my life is hell
I cant help it
I just cant
Its too much for a girl like me
Just me
Why does this have to be
Im sick of it all
I cant catch myself everytime I fall
For this is my life
For my life is hell

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HELL

Contributed by sick_n_twisted on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 05:15:23 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Today I woke up feeling like *****
Could hardly open my eyes
Because my head hurt so much
Crying myself to sleep has done something
I cant help it
I just cant
Its too much for a girl like me
Just me
Why does this have to be
Im sick of it all
I cant catch myself everytime I fall
Im gonna pull the trigger for the last time
Yes
I am weak
Yes
Im a coward
Im a loser
I lost this game called life
Im dumb
For everything I've ever done
I wont feel like ***** anymore
I will close my eyes permently
Never to wake
Laughing and smiling I will no longer have to fake
For this is my life
For my life is hell
I cant help it
I just cant
Its too much for a girl like me
Just me
Why does this have to be
Im sick of it all
I cant catch myself everytime I fall
For this is my life
For my life is hell

Copyright © sick_n_twisted ... [ 2005-05-13 17:15:23]
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Re: HELL (User Rating: 1 )
by Vermillion on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 06:31:33 PM AEST
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this is a spectacular poem. i really love the beat of the words and how well they flow

"for this is my life
for my life is hell"

such great words from obviously such a great writer. i do hope this isnt the way you really feel, the world would truely be at a loss to lose someone with your talent

~vermillion~

Re: HELL (User Rating: 1 )
by Stonedraider23 on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 08:00:33 PM AEST
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good write but yea there b alot of us who feel this way

Re: HELL (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 08:33:38 PM AEST
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i really love this poem, I can totally relate, I feel the exact same way, well not the exact way no one can feel exactly like anyone else, various degrees of hell grow from various lives
live in
kc

Re: HELL (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Friday, 13th May 2005 @ 10:49:37 PM AEST
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man twisted...

that some deep ....

towards the end of the poem,
I could feel my face saggin'.. lol
(really)

wicked..

M.O.H.

Re: HELL (User Rating: 1 )
by angel_eyes70 on Thursday, 30th March 2006 @ 02:40:49 PM AEST
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AWwwww Wut a great poem! you are so gifted!
XxxKimxxX

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