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The windows to the soul
Blank
Black
The way they water without real feeling
And tears fall down my face
Like blood in the rain
Like love in the pain
I’m falling
Falling again
Behind the whispers
The sun as she sets
Is a secret
As dark as the darkness that swallows us whole
They don’t know
They can’t empathise
They just criticise
What’s behind these eyes
They wouldn’t understand why the tears that fall are blood
They wouldn’t understand why I feel this sweet remorse
What’s behind the eyes
The eyes of mine
Is a love to intertwine
A love taken
Another forsaken
What’s behind the eyes?
It’s pure death.
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Pure Death...

Contributed by Vermilion on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 05:58:07 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Behind the eyes
The windows to the soul
Blank
Black
The way they water without real feeling
And tears fall down my face
Like blood in the rain
Like love in the pain
I’m falling
Falling again
Behind the whispers
The sun as she sets
Is a secret
As dark as the darkness that swallows us whole
They don’t know
They can’t empathise
They just criticise
What’s behind these eyes
They wouldn’t understand why the tears that fall are blood
They wouldn’t understand why I feel this sweet remorse
What’s behind the eyes
The eyes of mine
Is a love to intertwine
A love taken
Another forsaken
What’s behind the eyes?
It’s pure death.

Copyright Â© Vermilion ... [ 2005-05-12 05:58:07]
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Re: Pure Death... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 08:54:30 AM AEST
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Wow..Great write..
looks not with the eyes, but with the heart and soul...
LOve it ~~~Michelle~~~

Re: Pure Death... (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 11:31:24 AM AEST
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This is the second of yours i've read and it's all good! Your writings come from somewhere dark, can't wait to see more in the future sometime..

Re: Pure Death... (User Rating: 1 )
by flamingblade on Friday, 28th October 2005 @ 03:21:16 PM AEST
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i really like this. I have been depresseed lately , and its nice to know that someone feels the same. Thank you for writing this truly artistic poem .
hope to see new poems by you,
flamingblade

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