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[aid] => mick
[title] => To Steve and his comrades fighting in Iraq...
[time] => 2005-05-10 08:15:25
[hometext] => To Steve and all his fellow comrades serving in Iraq, May God protect u always and bring u safely home.
[bodytext] => I hear you're close to danger
That you all need our prayers
On bended knees I go
To make heard your despair
May God keep you all safe
Keep a watchful eye on you
Send down his guardian angels
To help you all get through
Be brave dear comrades
For with our hearts we pray
You're facing all sorts of danger
Each and everyday
May you all be guarded
Against the terror that exists
Heartfelt hopes and wishes
Our prayers surely consist
God bless your hearts
Each and everyday
May he keep you safe from harm
In every single way
On bended knees I get down
Every morning and every night
Sending you all heartfelt prayers
To keep up the strength to fight
Our deepest of wishes
We send your very way
For God to watch out for you
Bringing you safely home someday...
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To Steve and his comrades fighting in Iraq...
Contributed by
mina-1
on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 08:15:25 AM in AEST
Topic:
war
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I hear you're close to danger
That you all need our prayers
On bended knees I go
To make heard your despair
May God keep you all safe
Keep a watchful eye on you
Send down his guardian angels
To help you all get through
Be brave dear comrades
For with our hearts we pray
You're facing all sorts of danger
Each and everyday
May you all be guarded
Against the terror that exists
Heartfelt hopes and wishes
Our prayers surely consist
God bless your hearts
Each and everyday
May he keep you safe from harm
In every single way
On bended knees I get down
Every morning and every night
Sending you all heartfelt prayers
To keep up the strength to fight
Our deepest of wishes
We send your very way
For God to watch out for you
Bringing you safely home someday...
Copyright ©
mina-1
... [
2005-05-10 08:15:25]
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Re: To Steve and his comrades fighting in Iraq...
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by Former_Member on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 08:46:57 AM AEST
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Sue,
GReat write!!! I couldn't agree more. God bless them all and bring them home safe!!
Leia |
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Re: To Steve and his comrades fighting in Iraq...
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by Vampirequeen on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 10:18:49 AM AEST
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awww so sweet of you to write this for them.
good job. |
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Re: To Steve and his comrades fighting in Iraq...
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by Jaycee on
Tuesday, 10th May 2005 @ 12:01:48 PM AEST
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| This was a superb write. Not just content, though I think we can never truly appreciate how the soldiers overseas buy us our freedom with their lives (regardless of whatever the political realities of the war are, the soldiers do their job for us) but so well written. I am blatantly envious of your skill :) |
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Re: To Steve and his comrades fighting in Iraq...
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by sride686 on
Wednesday, 11th May 2005 @ 09:11:11 PM AEST
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| thank you so very much for this write Sue it truly touches my heart and it was written so well. you are such a good friend and thank you for your thoughts and prayers. I don't have much time to comment I have patrol in a few min. take care my friend and know you are loved and thought of often. take care always and thank you again for this heart felt read. as always your work of art has touched the deepest depths of my soul. Bye for now my friend....Steve |
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Re: To Steve and his comrades fighting in Iraq...
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 04:43:55 PM AEST
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Such a wonderful gesture and a beautiful gift!!
Shows what a caring person you are..
Hugs
Jenni |
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Re: To Steve and his comrades fighting in Iraq...
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by Sinned on
Wednesday, 18th May 2005 @ 05:16:29 PM AEST
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mina-1
I see your friend Steve made the first comment---That was really nice.
I certinly pray for their safty.hey they are all heros.
Nice tribute grl.
Let us all be thankful and keep them all in our prayers.
Your friend
Dennis----Sinned |
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Re: To Steve and his comrades fighting in Iraq...
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by poet70 on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 01:11:32 AM AEST
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| It is a great thing writing this for Steve and everyone over there, great job, I really enkoyed, and it was read heart felt, thanks Mini-1, Tammi |
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Re: To Steve and his comrades fighting in Iraq...
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 23rd May 2005 @ 04:03:45 PM AEST
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| This was such a nice write. Yes I wish they all remain safe over there. Nice work! |
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Re: To Steve and his comrades fighting in Iraq...
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 25th May 2005 @ 08:27:25 PM AEST
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Amen to that! Sue this was such a selfless write and I think it was well written, and I think you're a dear friend to our Steve. I'm sure this warms his heart whenever he reads it....
Scorp. |
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