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Have you ever listened to your gram, and hear she didn’t make it?
Have you ever stayed up the whole night, crying to your-self?
Have you ever been in so much pain, you thought of suicide t be the only way?
Have you ever thought that something would never happen, but happens right before your eyes?
Have you ever thought of taking care of your mom when she got sick?

YES!!!
I have, until you do, you don’t know what I feel. Stop saying you do.

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have you ever

Contributed by edward_jarvis2000 on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 10:39:49 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

Have you ever walked in to your house, finding your mom not to be there?
Have you ever listened to your gram, and hear she didn’t make it?
Have you ever stayed up the whole night, crying to your-self?
Have you ever been in so much pain, you thought of suicide t be the only way?
Have you ever thought that something would never happen, but happens right before your eyes?
Have you ever thought of taking care of your mom when she got sick?

YES!!!
I have, until you do, you don’t know what I feel. Stop saying you do.

Copyright Â© edward_jarvis2000 ... [ 2005-05-09 10:39:49]
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Re: have you ever (User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 11:37:20 AM AEST
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yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, and yes... though my situations most likely differ so those answers would probably all be no in that case. i don't know, but i can guess - keep your chin up, you'll make it.
~Remy~

Re: have you ever (User Rating: 1 )
by bibi on Monday, 9th May 2005 @ 11:55:39 AM AEST
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I think it's only obvious we all have felt that way one time in our lives. whether you want to believe it or not some of us do know how you feel. i hope you feel better.

Re: have you ever (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 07:13:40 AM AEST
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My dad passed away when I was 17; it was for me the most tramatic expirience I have gone through, but I am still here today.

The void of lost love can never be filled by the wishes of their return but only by the love of their memory. In due time the heart grows and we become the echo of the one we loved.

I am glad to see that you are still writing through the bad emotions. I hope it is helping.

Re: have you ever (User Rating: 1 )
by Dorkfish on Thursday, 9th June 2005 @ 04:45:40 PM AEST
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My mother died when I was 13. I used poetry to help me deal. I'm glad you can express your feeling which I can very much understand is not something you want to talk about. I did not want to talk about it to anyone, but I dealt and grieved through writing. It will be ok, even though probably think it won't. 7 years later I can tell you I'm doing just fine. I still think about her, but you stop feeling angry and alone. Keep writing an expressing your feelings. You're doing a great job!

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