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Array ( [sid] => 93238 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Struggle with Sin [time] => 2005-05-04 07:41:17 [hometext] => This is a write about struggling with hate from sin in your life. comments would be great on this piece. Its not my best but you cant help what you write can you....Steve [bodytext] =>
I close my eyes as I loss control
My pain runs deep in the Devils control
For my demise is in His hands
The Devil is running my existence by His plan
For my life is no more, its no longer mine
But I want this hatred in me to subside
For the Devil has His grasp firm on my soul
But I want to give the Lord back control
So I look to Heaven with tears in my eyes
And ask His forgiveness for this pain in my life
He reaches down and touches my soul
And delivers me out of the Devil control
Now I’m unchained of all my pain but I still feel the shame
The shame for all the lies I spoke
And for all the hateful things I wrote
For I dwelt with my sin that blossomed with in
It grew with anguish and disgust that would never end
But now the Lord has changed me within
And the Lord has cleansed away every sin [comments] => 8 [counter] => 203 [topic] => 61 [informant] => sride686 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => selfstruggles )

Struggle with Sin

Contributed by sride686 on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 07:41:17 AM in AEST
Topic: selfstruggles

I close my eyes as I loss control
My pain runs deep in the Devils control
For my demise is in His hands
The Devil is running my existence by His plan
For my life is no more, its no longer mine
But I want this hatred in me to subside
For the Devil has His grasp firm on my soul
But I want to give the Lord back control
So I look to Heaven with tears in my eyes
And ask His forgiveness for this pain in my life
He reaches down and touches my soul
And delivers me out of the Devil control
Now I’m unchained of all my pain but I still feel the shame
The shame for all the lies I spoke
And for all the hateful things I wrote
For I dwelt with my sin that blossomed with in
It grew with anguish and disgust that would never end
But now the Lord has changed me within
And the Lord has cleansed away every sin

Copyright Â© sride686 ... [ 2005-05-04 07:41:17]
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Re: Struggle with Sin (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 10:28:17 AM AEST
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Very nice write. The "Devil" really stood out throughout and nailed the theme home. and to close on a positive point made it all worth reading. Good job. dw

Re: Struggle with Sin (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 11:12:10 AM AEST
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gosh that is guud. i rilly like this one. although sometimes its hard to like him, it helps to believe in God. im rite here if u ever need to spill some sins... dont let the devil conquer u... stay strong and keep belivin'.
luv n hugs and great admiration,
jennie*

Re: Struggle with Sin (User Rating: 1 )
by suicidal_imbecile on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 11:46:51 AM AEST
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i really apreciate all the comments you make on my poems, so i thought i should repay the favor and read some of your work, and damn i am so glad i did. At this point in my life i trying to choose a better path for myself, im trying to get back everything i had, including the lord. i used to be an athiest now im starting to believe again. this poem touched me hard. awsome awsome awsome write
kate

Re: Struggle with Sin (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 12:28:51 PM AEST
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Thats an awsome piece of write.
well done.

Re: Struggle with Sin (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 04:46:59 PM AEST
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Steve u always manage to capture whatever u write about so well. You have a great way of expressing ur emotions and that my friend is hard for many to do. Ur writing has its own uniqueness and stands out to the reader. Sometimes when we are struggling in life we stray from the right path, but with the loving guidance of God we manage to find our way back to the right path. Hang in there my friend and I'm always here for u in good times and bad. Always a pleasure reading ur remarkable work.
*hugs*,
~sue~

Re: Struggle with Sin (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 07:33:43 PM AEST
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From the mouth of an aithest namely me,

unto thee i say, and i quote, "LET THEM

WHO ARE AMONGST YOU FREE OF SIN,

CAST THE FIRST STONE" steve next 2 me,

your mr. rogers . . .

Dorian chambers

Re: Struggle with Sin (User Rating: 1 )
by KishaLovesCare126 on Friday, 6th May 2005 @ 05:05:39 PM AEST
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-huggles- I'm always here as well if you need to talk and you have my vote on this poem. WOW I'm really glad I read this poem:) AMZING work:D

luv,
Care

Re: Struggle with Sin (User Rating: 1 )
by Sinned on Tuesday, 31st May 2005 @ 07:48:24 PM AEST
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sride686

Outstanding-wonderful poem
May the peace of Jesus reside within you
Each day we struggle with evil
I pray for your safty and your return home

Sinned

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