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The moon begins to disappear

Another day without your smile
My eyes have wet another mile

This love has cost me all I am
It’s torn apart this broken man

Mourning comes, no sun can shine
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Mourning Comes

Contributed by wachumiri on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 07:11:59 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Morning comes as mists do clear
The moon begins to disappear

Another day without your smile
My eyes have wet another mile

This love has cost me all I am
It’s torn apart this broken man

Mourning comes, no sun can shine
For still I mourn that you’re not mine

Copyright Â© wachumiri ... [ 2005-05-01 19:11:59]
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Re: Mourning Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by Horsecrzy13 on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 09:43:01 AM AEST
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Tear...

Re: Mourning Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by glu1 on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 12:09:21 PM AEST
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Perfect, short yet detailed. So rich with your pain. I love it!

Re: Mourning Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 01:01:53 PM AEST
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awww!! heartbreakingly beautiful.... extra big hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Mourning Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 07:05:49 PM AEST
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That do be rather good, old man. Poetic. And longer lines! Aha!

Frank

Re: Mourning Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Saturday, 3rd September 2005 @ 08:27:05 AM AEST
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I like this. You have a pleasant style of writing that draws in the reader and helps him relate. I hope that you will not grieve too long though. I hope you find joy and peace.

Re: Mourning Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by anitajames on Friday, 16th September 2005 @ 11:44:43 AM AEST
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Short and powerful. Reminds me of the song You Won't be Mine by Matchbox 20.

Re: Mourning Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by thumper on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 06:56:04 AM AEST
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This is quite a short write, but speaks volumes! I love the R&R in this. I was going to quote a line, but they all are so revelant and aching. (Gads, I hope I spelled that right). Peace to you.
Thumps ;o)

Re: Mourning Comes (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 5th October 2005 @ 08:04:15 PM AEST
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May ur beautiful loving heart heal real soon my dear friend. I feel ur pain through every word. May the sun shine brighter ur way today and every other day. Chin up, u need not be alone. You have friends who are here for you to help ease the pain.
*heartfelt love n hugs* from ur fan,
Sue

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