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Array ( [sid] => 92575 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => So alone it hurts [time] => 2005-04-28 12:50:06 [hometext] => Please comment [bodytext] => I have some good friends
including the girl with such poise
so why do I feel so alone
and the need to make noise

I'm not all that young
maybe's got to do with my age
With the world passing by
Like being in a cage

Okay, I'm different and
apparently not a datable guy
Loneliness eating up my heart
I want to die

It hurts most at work
when I'm really busy
my world falling apart
it makes me dizzy

Take away my riches
just save me this:
a moment so fleeting
a warm tender kiss

Hot tears stain my cheeks
but my heart grows so cold
The emptiness inside
threatens to implode

Melting this ice
needs love full of fire
someone to care for
and fill with desire

Wanting one so badly
this isn't wrong
fear this will kill me
I can't wait this long

Then darkness engulfs me
the voices in my head
they whisper so softly
I'm better off dead

This isn't living
I barely exist
stay this way it will
until I've been kissed [comments] => 2 [counter] => 163 [topic] => 32 [informant] => Jaycee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
So alone it hurts

Contributed by Jaycee on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 12:50:06 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I have some good friends
including the girl with such poise
so why do I feel so alone
and the need to make noise

I'm not all that young
maybe's got to do with my age
With the world passing by
Like being in a cage

Okay, I'm different and
apparently not a datable guy
Loneliness eating up my heart
I want to die

It hurts most at work
when I'm really busy
my world falling apart
it makes me dizzy

Take away my riches
just save me this:
a moment so fleeting
a warm tender kiss

Hot tears stain my cheeks
but my heart grows so cold
The emptiness inside
threatens to implode

Melting this ice
needs love full of fire
someone to care for
and fill with desire

Wanting one so badly
this isn't wrong
fear this will kill me
I can't wait this long

Then darkness engulfs me
the voices in my head
they whisper so softly
I'm better off dead

This isn't living
I barely exist
stay this way it will
until I've been kissed




Copyright © Jaycee ... [ 2005-04-28 12:50:06]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: So alone it hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by Kyarn on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 01:09:55 PM AEST
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This is a really well written poem. As to the point, I feel your pain. Bear with it. You'll find someone. God that sounds so cliche...
~Kyarn


Re: So alone it hurts (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 08:31:34 PM AEST
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i reeeally like this!

Hot tears stain my cheeks
but my heart grows so cold
The emptiness inside
threatens to implode

and

Then darkness engulfs me
the voices in my head
they whisper so softly
I'm better off dead

This isn't living
I barely exist
stay this way it will
until I've been kissed

wow pure genious in my mind. i looove it... the rythm and rhyme and style, it all fits together so perfectly. great job!
*reads again and again...*
jennie*




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