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Array ( [sid] => 92121 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Back From Where You Came [time] => 2005-04-24 14:13:34 [hometext] => Ok if I thought I knew irony before, no way... Remember dreaming up your perfect guy? Well I didn't just dream mine up I found him, but he's gone now, he passed away....Chris I'll always love you... I cried as I wrote this, forgive that it's not my best [bodytext] => Every little girl
Dreams up the perfect guy
Her valliant knight in armor
So modest, so shy

She never expects to fidn him
But settles instead
Settles on the closest thing
Still breathing, not dead

So you can guess my shock
My heart's great surprise
When I looked at your picture
And gazed into his eyes

It's like you sprang from my mind
You cam from my imagination
I got my perfect man for real
Not some settle-for imitation

So I guess it's only fitting
As sad as it seems
That you met an early end
I can only see you in my dreams [comments] => 5 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 22 [informant] => Kie-Kie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

Back From Where You Came

Contributed by Kie-Kie on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 02:13:34 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Every little girl
Dreams up the perfect guy
Her valliant knight in armor
So modest, so shy

She never expects to fidn him
But settles instead
Settles on the closest thing
Still breathing, not dead

So you can guess my shock
My heart's great surprise
When I looked at your picture
And gazed into his eyes

It's like you sprang from my mind
You cam from my imagination
I got my perfect man for real
Not some settle-for imitation

So I guess it's only fitting
As sad as it seems
That you met an early end
I can only see you in my dreams

Copyright © Kie-Kie ... [ 2005-04-24 14:13:34]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Back From Where You Came (User Rating: 1 )
by ruthy on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 03:33:02 PM AEST
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very touching poem, enojoyed it very much

Re: Back From Where You Came (User Rating: 1 )
by loveisendless on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 11:02:38 PM AEST
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SO SORRY ABOUT YOUR LOSS! THE POEM COMES STRAIGHT FROM YOUR LOVING HEART!! IT SHOWS JUST HOW MUCH YOU LOVED HIM & THAT'S ALL IT NEEDS TO SAY!!! JUST REMEMBER:EVERY PERFECT GUY,HAS A PERFECT GIRL!!!! PLEASE TAKE CARE!!!!!

DAN!!!!!!

Re: Back From Where You Came (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 12:47:46 AM AEST
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Deeply touching..you did it well. venkat

Re: Back From Where You Came (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 02:14:19 PM AEST
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omg this poem is gorgeous, youve written something so tender and beautiful even in your pain... hugs n' love nessa

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Re: Back From Where You Came (User Rating: 1 )
by PuppyChow on Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 10:56:24 AM AEST
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tugged on my heartstrings....
thanx 4 sharing.

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