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Array ( [sid] => 92083 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i can't bring time back (sonnet) [time] => 2005-04-24 06:57:15 [hometext] => got my inspirations in school again. it's about how much i wanted to turn back time to tell him how i felt. comments are more than welcome. [bodytext] => may the words come out of my mouth;
it would be silent to you.
my actions are not worthy of your time.
and you would not know how i feel.

i have lost faith in hope;
lost hope in your soul.
it pains me to see you cry,
because it's you who i behold.

time is short-lived
memories, too.
moments have left forever;
we are fortune's fool.

if only i could turn back time,
i would definitely make you mine. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 22 [informant] => mysonnet [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

i can't bring time back (sonnet)

Contributed by mysonnet on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 06:57:15 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

may the words come out of my mouth;
it would be silent to you.
my actions are not worthy of your time.
and you would not know how i feel.

i have lost faith in hope;
lost hope in your soul.
it pains me to see you cry,
because it's you who i behold.

time is short-lived
memories, too.
moments have left forever;
we are fortune's fool.

if only i could turn back time,
i would definitely make you mine.

Copyright © mysonnet ... [ 2005-04-24 06:57:15]
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Re: i can't bring time back (sonnet) (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 06:59:46 AM AEST
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time is short so we should make the most of it.I think we 'd all turn back time for some reason or another if we could. a great poem, well written

pix xx

Re: i can't bring time back (sonnet) (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 07:21:01 AM AEST
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agree with pixie this is short but absolutely lovely to read - excellent piece

Re: i can't bring time back (sonnet) (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 08:40:26 AM AEST
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beautifully written

Re: i can't bring time back (sonnet) (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Sunday, 24th April 2005 @ 11:34:40 AM AEST
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A nicely written piece of poetry. It would be nice if we could turn back time.
Sad, but otherwise enjoyable read. Well done.
Hugs,
~sue~

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