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Array ( [sid] => 91767 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Helpless [time] => 2005-04-21 17:43:55 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Why do I feel as if I am not good enough?
I can't make myself or anyone around me happy?
I feel unwanted and unloved
Am I really that duncical that I would hurt someone
I really love?
The answer is obvious I gues
No matter how hard I try
I can never do anything right
When i try to do the right thing, I end up hurt
When i do the wrong thing, my heart aches
So either way I'm struck
Why do I even try?
I get more lost in this world as the days go on
I can't even gather my thoughts anymore
I'm outraged, hurt, upset, angry, annoyed, and irritated
If only I weren't here to deal with this *****
I also feel hypocritical because I can't trust anyone
But am I even to be trusted?
My feelings are so clustered and out of control
This madnes and cold grows deeper in my soul
EVERYDAY!!!!!!!!!!
Now I have no one to turn to
I betrayed everyone I could tell my emotions to
Everyone else doesn't have a clue
What am I to do?
But I don't want to seem so self-concerned
I just can't help it because everything
changes so dramatically
Should I just let this be?
I guess I have no choice [comments] => 2 [counter] => 174 [topic] => 48 [informant] => PainfulSpirit06 [notes] => (Keep it clean, please) Mod_11 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Helpless

Contributed by PainfulSpirit06 on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 05:43:55 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Why do I feel as if I am not good enough?
I can't make myself or anyone around me happy?
I feel unwanted and unloved
Am I really that duncical that I would hurt someone
I really love?
The answer is obvious I gues
No matter how hard I try
I can never do anything right
When i try to do the right thing, I end up hurt
When i do the wrong thing, my heart aches
So either way I'm struck
Why do I even try?
I get more lost in this world as the days go on
I can't even gather my thoughts anymore
I'm outraged, hurt, upset, angry, annoyed, and irritated
If only I weren't here to deal with this *****
I also feel hypocritical because I can't trust anyone
But am I even to be trusted?
My feelings are so clustered and out of control
This madnes and cold grows deeper in my soul
EVERYDAY!!!!!!!!!!
Now I have no one to turn to
I betrayed everyone I could tell my emotions to
Everyone else doesn't have a clue
What am I to do?
But I don't want to seem so self-concerned
I just can't help it because everything
changes so dramatically
Should I just let this be?
I guess I have no choice




Copyright © PainfulSpirit06 ... [ 2005-04-21 17:43:55]
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Re: Helpless (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 07:45:46 PM AEST
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a soul bearing poem, well written and expressed. I hope that writing this gave you some release from the way you are feeling, you seem to have a lot going on in your mind and have spoken about it well here

pix xx


Re: Helpless (User Rating: 1 )
by MeenieMo on Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 02:07:57 PM AEST
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Wow. That feels like me at times too. It seems that all i do is hurt the ones i love. Great work.




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