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Array ( [sid] => 9172 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Parthian Arrow [time] => 2002-12-24 14:30:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] =>

~*~

Ahh.. past love is dead
let the words be said
nary a tear filled eye
nor sad darkened skies,

~*~

forever to sit and write
by candle's unwithered light
spare me then until I die
leave no sad or happy sigh,

~*~

of lies and heart's frost
memories soft luster lost
there is no longer trust
may the love rot in dust...

§* *§
*|*

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Parthian Arrow

Contributed by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 02:30:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

~*~

Ahh.. past love is dead
let the words be said
nary a tear filled eye
nor sad darkened skies,

~*~

forever to sit and write
by candle's unwithered light
spare me then until I die
leave no sad or happy sigh,

~*~

of lies and heart's frost
memories soft luster lost
there is no longer trust
may the love rot in dust...

§* *§
*|*

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Re: Parthian Arrow (User Rating: 1 )
by Fwog on Tuesday, 24th December 2002 @ 11:57:59 PM AEST
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A really good write,
I enjoyed this a lot
Hugz

Re: Parthian Arrow (User Rating: 1 )
by Aidan on Wednesday, 25th December 2002 @ 08:52:42 PM AEST
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Wistful yet resigned, determined even; this poem evokes a strong emotion response.

Excellent.

Re: Parthian Arrow (User Rating: 1 )
by Ramfire on Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 02:56:39 PM AEST
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Sad poem, but beautifully written.
Regards,
Ramfire

Re: Parthian Arrow (User Rating: 1 )
by wordsy on Sunday, 29th December 2002 @ 09:29:32 AM AEST
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Words well woven.

wordsy.

Re: Parthian Arrow (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Friday, 2nd April 2004 @ 11:04:14 AM AEST
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"forever to sit and write
by candle's unwithered light
spare me then until I die
leave no sad or happy sigh, "

I loved this stanza. You write so uniquely and deeply. I am in awe......Kie

Re: Parthian Arrow (User Rating: 1 )
by Cynthia on Monday, 17th May 2004 @ 06:05:53 PM AEST
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Such an emotional write my dearest friend Nessa. Excellent. *S* Cynthia

Re: Parthian Arrow (User Rating: 1 )
by hray42 on Sunday, 27th April 2014 @ 05:02:07 PM AEST
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Ahhh.. I'm starting to see it now.. Especially with this poem.. You and I have very similar writing styles as well as format in punctuation, or lack there of I should say.. I try to keep it as simple as possible.. So seems you.. I did like this one.. Short, as well it needed to be.. It's a very nice poem.. Take care....

Re: Parthian Arrow (User Rating: 1 )
by deadreckoning1983 on Monday, 24th November 2014 @ 04:29:51 AM AEST
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Nessa this is very sad and brought a tear to my eye. that last stanza was particularly poignant.

Memories soft luster lost.....

I will be thinking of that line for a long time

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