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Array ( [sid] => 91524 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You don't deserve... [time] => 2005-04-19 20:19:40 [hometext] => *only someone who has cried a great deal knows why someone else wants to stop the tears* [bodytext] => You don't deserve these tears
that I've stayed up all night crying
nor the smiles that I gave you
when inside I felt like dying

You don't deserve my heart
that, like a fool, I gave away
nor the hateful words I've thought
but haven't had the nerve to say

You don't deserve the dreams
that I have of you at night
nor the memories we share
of things that used to feel so right

You don't deserve these things
and yet I can't get them to stop
so I pray for the day
when not another tear will drop [comments] => 4 [counter] => 222 [topic] => 22 [informant] => breny [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

You don't deserve...

Contributed by breny on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 08:19:40 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You don't deserve these tears
that I've stayed up all night crying
nor the smiles that I gave you
when inside I felt like dying

You don't deserve my heart
that, like a fool, I gave away
nor the hateful words I've thought
but haven't had the nerve to say

You don't deserve the dreams
that I have of you at night
nor the memories we share
of things that used to feel so right

You don't deserve these things
and yet I can't get them to stop
so I pray for the day
when not another tear will drop

Copyright Â© breny ... [ 2005-04-19 20:19:40]
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Re: You don't deserve... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 08:32:35 PM AEST
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i love this poem. i know how you feel. but anyways, i just love your poem. great job. peace n love. jenny

Re: You don't deserve... (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Wednesday, 20th April 2005 @ 07:09:44 AM AEST
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Aww Brenna, this is such a sad and heart breaking write. I can feel your pain through every word. Hang tuff friend. In time your sad little heart shall heal and it shall flow with joy and happiness once again. A sad, but very well written poem.
Hugs,
~Sue~

Re: You don't deserve... (User Rating: 1 )
by sride686 on Thursday, 21st April 2005 @ 10:32:49 AM AEST
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This is a great write when you read mine and Gave me good comments I had to read some of your work and I’m glad I did. Its nice to see someone who is feeling how I feel but I’m sorry you have to go through this. But you will find strength in future relationships, by the way you write I can tell you are a awesome person and someday you’ll find the one how will love you as you love them. Take care….Steve

Re: You don't deserve... (User Rating: 1 )
by Karazoul on Wednesday, 23rd November 2005 @ 06:16:41 PM AEST
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Wow. This is beautiful! I love it!

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