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Array ( [sid] => 91265 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Shadows Of Paranoia [time] => 2005-04-17 13:04:12 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Illusions thrill
sensations kill
love the way it feels
lets do it all night
but there's something strange
about the way
this distortion feels
It's to nice.

It's so Insane
I laugh while I cry
sleep in the day awake all night
love is a need
I get it and then I flee,
It's so Insane
don't know what to do
so torn and confused
I pause and I freeze...

So beautiful
just like I dreamed
loves oh so sweet
wanna do it all night,
the thrill it kills
I have no will
but I can see
somethings not right.

I think it's time for me to leave
so emotionally twisted
I almost believe
there's a place for me,
I scream I shout I stomp I pout
release me now
oh please let me out.

Don't know what to do
I'm so torn and confused
I want what I don't need
get to close and I flee,
sensational is the feel
when love is real
but
I pause and I freeze....
something's in the shadows smirking. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 159 [topic] => 43 [informant] => secretwind [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Shadows Of Paranoia

Contributed by secretwind on Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 01:04:12 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Illusions thrill
sensations kill
love the way it feels
lets do it all night
but there's something strange
about the way
this distortion feels
It's to nice.

It's so Insane
I laugh while I cry
sleep in the day awake all night
love is a need
I get it and then I flee,
It's so Insane
don't know what to do
so torn and confused
I pause and I freeze...

So beautiful
just like I dreamed
loves oh so sweet
wanna do it all night,
the thrill it kills
I have no will
but I can see
somethings not right.

I think it's time for me to leave
so emotionally twisted
I almost believe
there's a place for me,
I scream I shout I stomp I pout
release me now
oh please let me out.

Don't know what to do
I'm so torn and confused
I want what I don't need
get to close and I flee,
sensational is the feel
when love is real
but
I pause and I freeze....
something's in the shadows smirking.

Copyright © secretwind ... [ 2005-04-17 13:04:12]
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Re: Shadows Of Paranoia (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 17th April 2005 @ 09:12:30 PM AEST
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I really loved the title and I can really relate to
the confusion portrayed in this poem
especially in regards to love. I thought this
was a very honest well-written poem.
Continue writing hopefully you will find the
answers to your confusion within your writing.

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Shadows Of Paranoia (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 03:59:39 AM AEST
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Very sad but great writing as always.
I know the feelings.
huggs,
emy

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