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Enraptured I
Have cast my eye
And it has stopped on you

As you sit there
Still unaware
Of what you put me through

I say the lines
Show all the signs
But you don’t even glance

And so I try
To walk on by
You wont give me a chance

And deep inside
the pain i hide
I wish I knew your name

I burn as fire
As I inquire
The answer is... chow mein.
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Agonized Allure

Contributed by Shishke_Bob on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 06:23:20 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

Agonized Allure.

Enraptured I
Have cast my eye
And it has stopped on you

As you sit there
Still unaware
Of what you put me through

I say the lines
Show all the signs
But you don’t even glance

And so I try
To walk on by
You wont give me a chance

And deep inside
the pain i hide
I wish I knew your name

I burn as fire
As I inquire
The answer is... chow mein.

Copyright Â© Shishke_Bob ... [ 2005-04-15 18:23:20]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Agonized Allure (User Rating: 1 )
by Fionndruinne on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 06:41:50 PM AEST
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It's inspiring, and I'm hungry.

I think we can all identify with the emotion expressed here. A truly timeless first submission.

Andrew

Re: Agonized Allure (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 09:12:31 PM AEST
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Cool well done , i love chow mein---lol

Re: Agonized Allure (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 16th April 2005 @ 02:20:51 AM AEST
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This is well written and unique, I love it.

Leia

Re: Agonized Allure (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Tuesday, 19th April 2005 @ 04:03:26 AM AEST
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Oh me, you've done it again.
Luv your style of writing.
Yeah, I'm hungry now too.
Welcome and keep up the good work.
luv, huggs, smiles,
emy

Re: Agonized Allure (User Rating: 1 )
by Wachumiri on Thursday, 28th April 2005 @ 01:52:49 PM AEST
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Of course... now understand the burning in my flesh, the yearning in my heart.
I must have... chow mein? Ok, it works. Maybe a little too, melodramatic, or some big word like that, but it works.
Take care Bobby,
David

Re: Agonized Allure (User Rating: 1 )
by Horsecrzy13 on Sunday, 1st May 2005 @ 06:25:33 PM AEST
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Interesting......

Brina!

Re: Agonized Allure (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Monday, 2nd May 2005 @ 08:46:32 PM AEST
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beautifully written, warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa

@->>->:-

Re: Agonized Allure (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Tuesday, 3rd May 2005 @ 06:23:56 AM AEST
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Inscrutable. As deep as any dish I have pondered, as complex as any Won Ton soup I have lovingly eaten....lovingly eaten, ahhhhhhhhh. Sorry, What Oh, yes the poem. A very different first posting, where most people (including moi) try to power up a big angsty piece to establish their site cred as a "POET".

I think this is a new genre in the making. Present it to an ad company - I do believe you're on a winner.

Spike

Re: Agonized Allure (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Saturday, 21st May 2005 @ 11:58:15 PM AEST
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Truly a relatable piece. I know whereof you speak... I haven't really told anyone this - but... the truth is, I've fallen head over heels for chop suey... lol.

Welcome to YPDC! What a way to come through the door. *smiles*

~Snemmy~

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