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It builds up in me

And it chokes me till I can’t breath

You are everything to me

You are more than anyone of my dreams have shown me
You are more than what heaven can show me

You are how I know that magic is real
It’s how I feel when I hear your voice

Nothing has felt as good as me
As good as I do when I hear you say you love me

Just that is worth more than anything to me
But you give me so much more

You are like a song no one can sing
The words are like chasms of meaning

I can’t vocalize what I feel
It builds up in me

And it chokes me till I can’t breath

You are everything to me

I would go through everything I have
If in the end I would meet you again

I would willingly go through all the torments and pain
I would willingly wear all my shackles and restraints

Nothing in this world could keep me from you

You are so overwhelming to me
To much to take in at once

All your beauty, grace and charms
They all make me want you in my arms

That’s why I want you for always
I want to be yours for always
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A Song That I can't sing, ( The Words are chasms of meaning )

Contributed by Doriens_Picture on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 12:37:09 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



I can’t vocalize what I feel
It builds up in me

And it chokes me till I can’t breath

You are everything to me

You are more than anyone of my dreams have shown me
You are more than what heaven can show me

You are how I know that magic is real
It’s how I feel when I hear your voice

Nothing has felt as good as me
As good as I do when I hear you say you love me

Just that is worth more than anything to me
But you give me so much more

You are like a song no one can sing
The words are like chasms of meaning

I can’t vocalize what I feel
It builds up in me

And it chokes me till I can’t breath

You are everything to me

I would go through everything I have
If in the end I would meet you again

I would willingly go through all the torments and pain
I would willingly wear all my shackles and restraints

Nothing in this world could keep me from you

You are so overwhelming to me
To much to take in at once

All your beauty, grace and charms
They all make me want you in my arms

That’s why I want you for always
I want to be yours for always




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Re: A Song That I can't sing, ( The Words are chasms of meaning ) (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 12:43:06 AM AEST
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Another good write, my friend.
huggs,
emy


Re: A Song That I can't sing, ( The Words are chasms of meaning ) (User Rating: 1 )
by Gothchyk on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 12:43:14 AM AEST
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Nothing has felt as good as me
As good as I do when I hear you say you love me

Just that is worth more than anything to me
But you give me so much more

you are so sweet :)


Re: A Song That I can't sing, ( The Words are chasms of meaning ) (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 01:04:09 AM AEST
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Ah,....even if you wouldnt have said you wrote this after hearing vermillion1/2.....I would have totally called you on it...some of the lines..(alot actually) are near copies added to your remix of the song....Very well done my friend....cant blame you for remixing greatness....;]

Clark


Re: A Song That I can't sing, ( The Words are chasms of meaning ) (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 06:26:53 AM AEST
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A nicely written poem. Beautiful and sweet.
Thanks for sharing.
Hugs,
~Sue~


Re: A Song That I can't sing, ( The Words are chasms of meaning ) (User Rating: 1 )
by bonita2689 on Friday, 22nd April 2005 @ 06:51:45 PM AEST
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Ooo that one was purty and it made me very jealous...




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