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Ancient scriptures of the long-deceased,
Whispered in breaths of the damned,
Acrid, revolting stench of fear and hate,
My name as text on their forked tongues…


Pathetic flesh, your existence means nothing to me,
And I rid you the burden of living,
With a gentle touch of my lips…
Gaze upon the darkness around you,
Bittersweet obscurity, delicious morbidity…


Like a cancer, spreading as if fire within your veins,
I watch with utmost glee,
As you die…ever so slowly…
Withering into nothing,
With every tainted kiss I give…

Acidic caresses, searing words,
I sing my hymn of death,
Embracing the world with my bitter arms,
Lulling all to horrifying slumber,
For in their dreams,
There I shall be…


Infinite nights of pleasurable pain,
Chamber floors decorated with your sweet crimson lies,
A sea of scarlet desire,
And I cant help but drown in this depthless sacrifice,
Blood…my life, my ravenous hunger…

You claim you have seen it all…
Your eyes are blind to the monstrosities,
That wish not to be seen…
They lurk in the shadows of your imagination,
Feeding off your sanity…

You say you have heard it all…
Your ears are deaf to the unbearable screams of the dead and dying…
They dwell beneath the land on which you stand,
Clawing the dirt and bones above them,
Begging for release…


What now, wretched soul?
Do you wish for an end?
Would you take back all the wrong-doings you have committed,
And decide to live once again?

Ignorant fool, you failed to see…
There is no other chance to be free…
You’re already dead, this is your hell,
The cause of it all,

ME… [comments] => 3 [counter] => 217 [topic] => 13 [informant] => FleurdeSang [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Sacrifice

Contributed by FleurdeSang on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 04:13:20 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Worthless being, you dare utter my name?
Ancient scriptures of the long-deceased,
Whispered in breaths of the damned,
Acrid, revolting stench of fear and hate,
My name as text on their forked tongues…


Pathetic flesh, your existence means nothing to me,
And I rid you the burden of living,
With a gentle touch of my lips…
Gaze upon the darkness around you,
Bittersweet obscurity, delicious morbidity…


Like a cancer, spreading as if fire within your veins,
I watch with utmost glee,
As you die…ever so slowly…
Withering into nothing,
With every tainted kiss I give…

Acidic caresses, searing words,
I sing my hymn of death,
Embracing the world with my bitter arms,
Lulling all to horrifying slumber,
For in their dreams,
There I shall be…


Infinite nights of pleasurable pain,
Chamber floors decorated with your sweet crimson lies,
A sea of scarlet desire,
And I cant help but drown in this depthless sacrifice,
Blood…my life, my ravenous hunger…

You claim you have seen it all…
Your eyes are blind to the monstrosities,
That wish not to be seen…
They lurk in the shadows of your imagination,
Feeding off your sanity…

You say you have heard it all…
Your ears are deaf to the unbearable screams of the dead and dying…
They dwell beneath the land on which you stand,
Clawing the dirt and bones above them,
Begging for release…


What now, wretched soul?
Do you wish for an end?
Would you take back all the wrong-doings you have committed,
And decide to live once again?

Ignorant fool, you failed to see…
There is no other chance to be free…
You’re already dead, this is your hell,
The cause of it all,

ME…




Copyright © FleurdeSang ... [ 2005-04-14 16:13:20]
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Re: Sacrifice (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Thursday, 14th April 2005 @ 11:12:34 PM AEST
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A creation deserving of praises of that which

is the likeness of the angels them selves in


which even they would bow in reverance to

you . . .

Dorian Chambers


Re: Sacrifice (User Rating: 1 )
by Pats4eva7 on Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 05:35:17 PM AEST
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Id have to say, you're my favorite poet on this site. The way you word your poems, it's incredible and Ive never seen words and emotions put quite like this. You seem to speak and write what others cant, and you tell it how it is, and how you feel, and it's all real. Im excited to read more.
*melyssa*


Re: Sacrifice (User Rating: 1 )
by car21221 on Monday, 24th October 2005 @ 01:22:18 PM AEST
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this is a very deep poem the writing is very good




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