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Array ( [sid] => 90855 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => facing life alone. . . [time] => 2005-04-13 17:07:48 [hometext] => im not perfect i pretend iam but behind the mask im not flawless,i have emotions like everyone else. . .please comment [bodytext] => walking down the street
the sun avoids my gaze
the sky isnt bright blue
its dark and black
lightning strikes my path
the thunder blocks my breathing
even though its day
the night is following me always
the creatures of hell watch in wonder
the ravens swarming the dark skies like vulters
behind everything is evil
im facing this life alone
the rose looks so beautiful but like me its lieing,hiding
behind those petals its thorns pump poison
and with each prick it seeps deeper into your blood
my mask half on
my eyes see the world for what it is
cruel and individual
everything alone
my heart is black,it feels so heavy
the hole of self pity is vanished
i dont hate the world anymore
i despise it
everything i do doesnt work
i give up
do you hear me?
i give up,my hope and heart are gone
iam nothing a nobody
im not worthy of being a person
i dont know what iam
ive tried being good
ive tried being bad
ive tasted harmony
ive tasted pain
either one does not work
i dont know what life wants from me
all i know is im destined to be alone
facing this life alone
no hug can relieve me from sorrow
no kiss can take the pain
im by myself
forever alone
as i close my eyes
i await death
at least i wont be alone
maybe finally,for once,i will be happy
ive dreamt about a smile
not off me from him
it was so peaceful
but as reality hit me
depression did also
maybe one day i will wake up
or go asleep forever
and this will end
i live alone
to face death alone to
i rather never face another day alive
than live forever alone without a heart to embrace joy
angelic words fill my head
and iam at peace
as i dream of eternal happiness
my eyes freeze and my tear warm
my heart shakes
and i dream forever on...alone
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facing life alone. . .

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 05:07:48 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



walking down the street
the sun avoids my gaze
the sky isnt bright blue
its dark and black
lightning strikes my path
the thunder blocks my breathing
even though its day
the night is following me always
the creatures of hell watch in wonder
the ravens swarming the dark skies like vulters
behind everything is evil
im facing this life alone
the rose looks so beautiful but like me its lieing,hiding
behind those petals its thorns pump poison
and with each prick it seeps deeper into your blood
my mask half on
my eyes see the world for what it is
cruel and individual
everything alone
my heart is black,it feels so heavy
the hole of self pity is vanished
i dont hate the world anymore
i despise it
everything i do doesnt work
i give up
do you hear me?
i give up,my hope and heart are gone
iam nothing a nobody
im not worthy of being a person
i dont know what iam
ive tried being good
ive tried being bad
ive tasted harmony
ive tasted pain
either one does not work
i dont know what life wants from me
all i know is im destined to be alone
facing this life alone
no hug can relieve me from sorrow
no kiss can take the pain
im by myself
forever alone
as i close my eyes
i await death
at least i wont be alone
maybe finally,for once,i will be happy
ive dreamt about a smile
not off me from him
it was so peaceful
but as reality hit me
depression did also
maybe one day i will wake up
or go asleep forever
and this will end
i live alone
to face death alone to
i rather never face another day alive
than live forever alone without a heart to embrace joy
angelic words fill my head
and iam at peace
as i dream of eternal happiness
my eyes freeze and my tear warm
my heart shakes
and i dream forever on...alone




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lovely darkside. you're bright side must blinding. kudos




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