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Awhile ago, we were cool, now you dont even hold my hand
We were together and we were fine
And it was great untill I tried to call you mine
Commitment never works, you always run away
Now you turn your back, dont even listen to what I say.
you're gone, and havent even tried to call
But it;s ok cause one day you will fall.
Casual sex, yea i hope you get AIDS
cause you dont care you just want to get layed.

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NO title

Contributed by MaRy_JaNe_420 on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 06:47:45 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Im confused, dont understand
Awhile ago, we were cool, now you dont even hold my hand
We were together and we were fine
And it was great untill I tried to call you mine
Commitment never works, you always run away
Now you turn your back, dont even listen to what I say.
you're gone, and havent even tried to call
But it;s ok cause one day you will fall.
Casual sex, yea i hope you get AIDS
cause you dont care you just want to get layed.

Copyright Â© MaRy_JaNe_420 ... [ 2005-04-12 18:47:45]
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Re: NO title (User Rating: 1 )
by XxCrYiNg4YoUxX on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 07:45:49 PM AEST
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Guys suck....Im very sorry that you have to feel like this too. I hope things get better for you.

Re: NO title (User Rating: 1 )
by bigtig6269 on Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 11:10:57 PM AEST
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ummm... I love you? lol. not all guys are like that. But they do make it hard fr the guys like me. I know where you coming from, but there's always more guys out there. good emotion

Re: NO title (User Rating: 1 )
by Jaycee on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 12:52:44 AM AEST
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Hi Mary Jane. I have seen so many guys mistreat gals emotionally, it is disgusting. The whole cliché that guys want only one thing... yeah, there are lots like that. Commitment is so hard for so many reasons. I'm not defending whoever he is - there is no excuse for emotional abuse - but guys gets scared. They won't admit it, but fear is such a huge component in the male mindset. Me, I could not wish AIDS on my worst enemy. It's not that my heart hasn't been ripped out and spit on and broken in half. It has. More than once. But I have to believe there are some good people out there. I certainly don't wish all the girls would die. I hope you can find the right person that can bring joy to your life.

Re: NO title (User Rating: 1 )
by MaRy_JaNe_420 on Wednesday, 13th April 2005 @ 06:05:04 PM AEST
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okay, the wishing AIDS upon someone is a bit harsh. But . . . well I'm still wishing it upon him. Its not like I just want him just to die though, ya know? I want him to suffer a bit. And I wouldn't wish it upon all guys and I take back the ALL guys sucking thing, you guys seem pretty normal. you can live but that it is all.

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