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Array ( [sid] => 90550 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => this is what happened [time] => 2005-04-10 20:59:29 [hometext] => this was written at the end of Feb. and I haven't continued it yet, it is a brief summary of my 9th grade year [bodytext] => They think my life is perfect
they think they know the truth
but the truth is that they don't know
they haven't got a clue

do they know the horrors
that have faced my highschool year?
all the death and pain
that I'm forced ot endear

lets start from the begining
the first month starts get-go
when first I saw him, my heart ringing
I didn't know what I know

But while all this is happening
there's stuff out of control
a schoolmate in coma
her death is near said so

and so in time she passes
and cry much did we do
That passes September and October
what will happen next fortrue

I see him again, and my heart aches
I know he used to like me
but now he is so over me
his love doth not invite me

So now November/December
and my heart aches now still
but now my friend does like him
and whats more I love him still

And so the new year passes
and those to do they date
but my life is preoccupied
with worry and with hate

My dear companion is growing old
so much pain and hurt shes in
and as her body does grow cold
so many more do sin

For as a breakup and a drift
set many friends in peril
Their family fights and arguments
make them consider barrel

So that is Jan and Febuary
March is yet to come
so as i write this poem right now
you may think me dumb

Because all you see is lucky me
with money, brains and ethics
so you assume that I drink tea
and hang wtih the magestics

You see my brand new puppy
my trophies high and clear
but maybe if you saw the problems
and the friends I hold so dear

You may realize that I'm not perfect
that I have problems too
so give it up and say goodbye
to all that you once knew

P.S. There is more here unmentioned
like art and accidents
but to tell them all would take to long
so I'll stop now here I'm through
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this is what happened

Contributed by spazz911 on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 08:59:29 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

They think my life is perfect
they think they know the truth
but the truth is that they don't know
they haven't got a clue

do they know the horrors
that have faced my highschool year?
all the death and pain
that I'm forced ot endear

lets start from the begining
the first month starts get-go
when first I saw him, my heart ringing
I didn't know what I know

But while all this is happening
there's stuff out of control
a schoolmate in coma
her death is near said so

and so in time she passes
and cry much did we do
That passes September and October
what will happen next fortrue

I see him again, and my heart aches
I know he used to like me
but now he is so over me
his love doth not invite me

So now November/December
and my heart aches now still
but now my friend does like him
and whats more I love him still

And so the new year passes
and those to do they date
but my life is preoccupied
with worry and with hate

My dear companion is growing old
so much pain and hurt shes in
and as her body does grow cold
so many more do sin

For as a breakup and a drift
set many friends in peril
Their family fights and arguments
make them consider barrel

So that is Jan and Febuary
March is yet to come
so as i write this poem right now
you may think me dumb

Because all you see is lucky me
with money, brains and ethics
so you assume that I drink tea
and hang wtih the magestics

You see my brand new puppy
my trophies high and clear
but maybe if you saw the problems
and the friends I hold so dear

You may realize that I'm not perfect
that I have problems too
so give it up and say goodbye
to all that you once knew

P.S. There is more here unmentioned
like art and accidents
but to tell them all would take to long
so I'll stop now here I'm through

Copyright © spazz911 ... [ 2005-04-10 20:59:29]
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Re: this is what happened (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 09:16:54 PM AEST
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Dang that was an awesome poem, people must understand that nobody, and everything is never totaly perfect there is always a problem in a persons one and only life. The mind can never stop thinking there is always multiple times in your life where you will always be thinking, there is never a time when your mind totaly shuts down, well untill you sleep.....

Re: this is what happened (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 11:35:11 AM AEST
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hey u mention me in this poem... i caused a lot of problems for you i know. but this is a great write me likes.
luv n hugs
jennie*

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