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Array ( [sid] => 90474 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You Saved Me [time] => 2005-04-10 02:48:09 [hometext] => hey,I didnt know what to put this under life or suicide or love [bodytext] => I wanna die
I wanna explode and cry
but the thought of you keeps me sane
I dont care about anyone else
only you,
If I could be your girlfriend
I would stay true and always love you
But its the girl everyone dreads and hates
Im the outcast
People are making me bitter
making me mean
But then I think of you
I dont wanna die
Cause maybe one day I could be loved by you
maybe one day I could be happy
I picture my happiness with you
But your friend comes up to me and says you hate me
I go home,Im tying the noose
theres nothing to live for
Everything but you I was willing to lose
As I was about to hang
the phone rings I figure why not
Your there you say wanna go out sometime
I cried and told you i felt the same way you thought I hated you
But now Im your girlfriend and would always stay true
you saved me from myself [comments] => 3 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 43 [informant] => sick_n_twisted [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

You Saved Me

Contributed by sick_n_twisted on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 02:48:09 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I wanna die
I wanna explode and cry
but the thought of you keeps me sane
I dont care about anyone else
only you,
If I could be your girlfriend
I would stay true and always love you
But its the girl everyone dreads and hates
Im the outcast
People are making me bitter
making me mean
But then I think of you
I dont wanna die
Cause maybe one day I could be loved by you
maybe one day I could be happy
I picture my happiness with you
But your friend comes up to me and says you hate me
I go home,Im tying the noose
theres nothing to live for
Everything but you I was willing to lose
As I was about to hang
the phone rings I figure why not
Your there you say wanna go out sometime
I cried and told you i felt the same way you thought I hated you
But now Im your girlfriend and would always stay true
you saved me from myself

Copyright © sick_n_twisted ... [ 2005-04-10 02:48:09]
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Re: You Saved Me (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 06:27:14 AM AEST
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I luv the ending to this.
Great writing.
huggs,
emy

Re: You Saved Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 08:56:21 AM AEST
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im sooo glad that ended like it did. i hope you're happy.

Re: You Saved Me (User Rating: 1 )
by angel_eyes70 on Wednesday, 12th October 2005 @ 01:24:14 AM AEST
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Yah, I Agree I Love The Ending To This!

*Hugs And Kisses*

Kimmy

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