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Array ( [sid] => 90439 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Entangled Fakes [time] => 2005-04-09 15:44:05 [hometext] => Please read and comment [bodytext] => Make up your god damn mind!
Your my best friend
And then I'm a loser
You're driving me round the bend

That's how it all started
How all of this began
Those stupid fakes called
And you stupidly ran

You became entangled
In the sinister truth
I knew I had to help
When I heard you crying on the roof

When you found out
That you'd been used
How painfully and cruelly
You'd been abused

I cried for you
That cold bitter night
You were slipping under
Losing sight

Sight and Judgement
That is all you lost
You gained nothing
Still payed the cost

But if only I had said something
If only I'd tried
Before you took it out on yourself
Before you died... [comments] => 4 [counter] => 175 [topic] => 36 [informant] => Dying_Angel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

Entangled Fakes

Contributed by Dying_Angel on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 03:44:05 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

Make up your god damn mind!
Your my best friend
And then I'm a loser
You're driving me round the bend

That's how it all started
How all of this began
Those stupid fakes called
And you stupidly ran

You became entangled
In the sinister truth
I knew I had to help
When I heard you crying on the roof

When you found out
That you'd been used
How painfully and cruelly
You'd been abused

I cried for you
That cold bitter night
You were slipping under
Losing sight

Sight and Judgement
That is all you lost
You gained nothing
Still payed the cost

But if only I had said something
If only I'd tried
Before you took it out on yourself
Before you died...

Copyright © Dying_Angel ... [ 2005-04-09 15:44:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Entangled Fakes (User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 09:45:01 PM AEST
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The ending was a shocker and I honestly don't know how to comment on this poem.

Its very powerful.

Kie

Re: Entangled Fakes (User Rating: 1 )
by jjones12 on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 10:58:30 PM AEST
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wow, great write.
=jen=

Re: Entangled Fakes (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 11:12:13 PM AEST
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.....it makes sence..sry thats the best i can say 4 now

Re: Entangled Fakes (User Rating: 1 )
by spazz911 on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 11:12:40 PM AEST
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.....it makes sence..sry thats the best i can say 4 now

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