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Array ( [sid] => 90339 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The angel of death [time] => 2005-04-08 14:18:43 [hometext] => Well, an old poem of mine that I have tried to fix up [bodytext] => Nobody can really see me
what I am trying to be
The only things I really want
Is those things that I can't

I want to sleep, to never be awake
People can't see that I am fake
The mask that I do show
It will only start to grow

When I close my eyes
I see people who dies
The solitude is killing me,
can not you see ?

I've heard that the ice is made to be broken
But I am left here all alone to get choken
I can not take this burden no more
It is killing me, this huge sore.

I could have take your breath
Because I am the angel of death
In the shadow we angels walk
together we angels talk

With black wings we fly
But the secret is,
even angels do cry.
The tears I have cried,
God nows I have tried.

I am so exhausted you know,
the biggest question is how
I need the strenght to move on
Feels like the bad angels won

Why can not I feel the cold breeze?
Why am I left here alone to freeze?
I just want to be set free
and make people once again
start believing in me.

I hope one day they will see
That I am inside of thee
I am everywhere
but still not there

I hope one day I will find peace
Instead of beeing just a piece
Of meat in the devils mouth
deep in the south

No one can tell you where
but I can tell you that
the angel of death was here [comments] => 5 [counter] => 166 [topic] => 13 [informant] => gothicangel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
The angel of death

Contributed by gothicangel on Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 02:18:43 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Nobody can really see me
what I am trying to be
The only things I really want
Is those things that I can't

I want to sleep, to never be awake
People can't see that I am fake
The mask that I do show
It will only start to grow

When I close my eyes
I see people who dies
The solitude is killing me,
can not you see ?

I've heard that the ice is made to be broken
But I am left here all alone to get choken
I can not take this burden no more
It is killing me, this huge sore.

I could have take your breath
Because I am the angel of death
In the shadow we angels walk
together we angels talk

With black wings we fly
But the secret is,
even angels do cry.
The tears I have cried,
God nows I have tried.

I am so exhausted you know,
the biggest question is how
I need the strenght to move on
Feels like the bad angels won

Why can not I feel the cold breeze?
Why am I left here alone to freeze?
I just want to be set free
and make people once again
start believing in me.

I hope one day they will see
That I am inside of thee
I am everywhere
but still not there

I hope one day I will find peace
Instead of beeing just a piece
Of meat in the devils mouth
deep in the south

No one can tell you where
but I can tell you that
the angel of death was here




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Re: The angel of death (User Rating: 1 )
by guts_n_glitter on Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 02:45:48 PM AEST
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good write
.-.x.-.


Re: The angel of death (User Rating: 1 )
by jjones12 on Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 08:43:15 PM AEST
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great write... sad.... deprsing...
=jen=


Re: The angel of death (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 10:30:45 PM AEST
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Long......but it gets the point across....I like parts of this, not all was all that hot, but still not bad, but still not great, The one verse that really struck me was:

I could have take your breath
Because I am the angel of death
In the shadow we angels walk
together we angels talk:

Clark


Re: The angel of death (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 12:17:59 AM AEST
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Nice writting deep and chilling a pool of

emotions . . .


Dorian Chambers


Re: The angel of death (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 12:18:08 AM AEST
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Nice writting deep and chilling a pool of

emotions . . .


Dorian Chambers




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