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I'm unloved, because I never was good enough.
The dove is crucified still not beloved,
And the perfect white wings fray into gray
With the blood that brings pain left to fade.

Sorry was never good enough for you.
Happiness is what you chose to lose
When you let the problems increase in size,
So now every reflection is without its eyes.

I'm faced now with what I never wanted,
A life that isn't worth the love to be coveted.
I cannot blame anyone but myself,
Because I didn't deserve love to be felt.

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Never Meant to Be

Contributed by essentially9 on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 10:15:40 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Never Meant to Be

I'm unloved, because I never was good enough.
The dove is crucified still not beloved,
And the perfect white wings fray into gray
With the blood that brings pain left to fade.

Sorry was never good enough for you.
Happiness is what you chose to lose
When you let the problems increase in size,
So now every reflection is without its eyes.

I'm faced now with what I never wanted,
A life that isn't worth the love to be coveted.
I cannot blame anyone but myself,
Because I didn't deserve love to be felt.

I never was good enough.

Copyright © essentially9 ... [ 2005-04-07 22:15:40]
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Re: Never Meant to Be (User Rating: 1 )
by BEBE on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 10:17:53 PM AEST
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Very good write, trust me the Lord did what he did , so that we could be.
Nice write though
BEBE

Re: Never Meant to Be (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 10:22:05 PM AEST
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Sad but written well.
Can't wait to hear a positive write from u.
luv, huggs,
emy

Re: Never Meant to Be (User Rating: 1 )
by ForeverAlone on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 10:34:02 PM AEST
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You know jen.....you always top yourself... Everything you do is amazing and beyond my ability...the sadness in this poem is unbelievable conveyed like always and it seems that you again have nothing to be discouraged about....this poem is a masterpiece and nothing less then mindblowing...

Clark

Re: Never Meant to Be (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 10:37:37 PM AEST
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Jen this is a truly sad and emotional write.
You've conveyed it so well. I could feel ur pain inevery line. A sad, but outstanding write.
Hugs,
Sue

Re: Never Meant to Be (User Rating: 1 )
by DorianChambers on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 11:00:02 PM AEST
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A poem describing an ambiguious trap of

self loathing . . . heavy peice of writting, deep

sad but always beautiful . . . you've got style

not 2 mention dignity and honesty, and that's

good enough 4 me, and so r u . . .

Doria Chambers

Re: Never Meant to Be (User Rating: 1 )
by tx_graffiti_gal on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 09:43:59 PM AEST
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awee... to feel your not good enough.. know the feeling. desire to be loved and have not love you. want to waiste away somewhere in the corner and wonder if anyone would notice. love your work..brings out alot in me.

Re: Never Meant to Be (User Rating: 1 )
by fielding88 on Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 11:24:44 PM AEST
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how many times have I felt the exact same way? I'd be hard pressed to count. Your recent work has just been so easily relatable, and this is no exception. The kind of words you used and the conclusion that summed up everything so simply, were all crafted beautifully. "I never was good enough," Ive told that to myself a lot at times, other times I don't feel it as much, and other times (like now), i feel it a lot. Way to speak to your readers :P *applause*

Re: Never Meant to Be (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 01:38:40 AM AEST
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Though some images and feelings seem to be much used in your earlier poems..it still captivates..well written. :-) venkat

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