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[title] => Double Speak
[time] => 2005-04-07 02:10:53
[hometext] => This just grabbed me tonight ... held me for half an hour ... and departed as quickly as it came
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Drag your painted nails down my…
Back before we knew there were no…
Answers don’t take form as we …
Desire burns within me now for…
You will never cease to be…
Amazing just how similar we…
Are you really here or
Fantasy
Waiting for a train to take me…
Home is anywhere that has your…
Heart will whisper louder than a…
Scream my name in passion through the…
Waves that lap against a sodden…
Shore defenses up so they don’t …
Fall into my arms and stay the…
Night is always darker when you’re…
Gone without a trace but
Memory
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Double Speak
Contributed by
Nazmythian
on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 02:10:53 AM in AEST
Topic:
MiscPoems
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Step into a room turn on the …
Light a cigarette and take a …
Drag your painted nails down my…
Back before we knew there were no…
Answers don’t take form as we …
Desire burns within me now for…
You will never cease to be…
Amazing just how similar we…
Are you really here or
Fantasy
Waiting for a train to take me…
Home is anywhere that has your…
Heart will whisper louder than a…
Scream my name in passion through the…
Waves that lap against a sodden…
Shore defenses up so they don’t …
Fall into my arms and stay the…
Night is always darker when you’re…
Gone without a trace but
Memory
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Nazmythian
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2005-04-07 02:10:53]
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Re: Double Speak
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by the_Ghost_Moth on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 03:03:17 AM AEST
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It works, man.
When I read it again
I am just amazed.
Something weird,
there's alot of good phrases in it
but they're all coming and going
at the same time.
--Ghosty |
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Re: Double Speak
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 03:57:50 AM AEST
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A rather intriguing as well as original write... I found it thought provoking...
Well done. |
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Re: Double Speak
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 06:55:07 AM AEST
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Well my friend, that was one damn inspired half an hour. This is masterfully written.
A heart will whisper louder than a scream....lol....that was brilliant.
Barkeep!!
Larry |
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Re: Double Speak
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by inoc on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 09:02:51 AM AEST
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Wow I love it...
you are a genious
cheers~
5 from me |
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Re: Double Speak
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 09:55:33 AM AEST
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Wow! This is Awesome! I love it , briliant.
Leia |
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Re: Double Speak
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by lostinmyself on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 10:59:57 AM AEST
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This is wicked Scott.
Very clever and creative, too
I love the way you wrote this..
Great write sweetie,
Phil xxx |
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Re: Double Speak
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by blowfish_jane on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 05:01:31 PM AEST
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Scott, that was just well writen and for 3o min this was just damn good.
Im always and still am amazed you do such wonderful job on youre writes.
Jane |
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Re: Double Speak
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by freckle on
Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 07:11:30 PM AEST
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Amazing write Nazzy! I love this one...so creative and ingenius! I love playing with words and it seems you do too! YEAH!!!
Carol |
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Re: Double Speak
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by GurlyTye on
Friday, 8th April 2005 @ 05:26:31 PM AEST
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| This is one of my favorites.. i love the way that the last word of every sentance starts the new one... its great. |
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Re: Double Speak
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by Spike on
Saturday, 9th April 2005 @ 08:05:41 AM AEST
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Those damn Muses, so fickle, so creative. Pretty good offering for a "quickie", though a poem that relies on its visual impact. If two people were reading alternate lines in staccato fashion it would have the same effect as reading it..........
Maybe its the time of night or the fugue state from the glowing screen, but I had to read it twice before I got it, and then a few more times, because it was so damn good.
Spike |
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Re: Double Speak
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by Dkanis on
Sunday, 10th April 2005 @ 08:32:56 PM AEST
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| wow, that was awesome! |
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Re: Double Speak
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by Willofree on
Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 11:03:36 AM AEST
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Naz,
After I read this 3x's I was able to appreciate how clever and unique this poem is. Then I read it again. It is amazing how you use words with a double meaning, serving two different ideas. Again a very inventive write. Perhaps inventer suits you more then creative; because you often are SO original that it probably hasn't been done before. Whereas creative can be innovative use of existing criteria.
You never cease to amaze me, Naz
Will, Terry |
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Re: Double Speak
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 12th April 2005 @ 05:43:14 AM AEST
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Now this is one unique write.
it puts one to thinking.
I've known a few double talkers in my day.
Awesome.
huggs,
emy |
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Re: Double Speak
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by Fionndruinne on
Friday, 15th April 2005 @ 05:51:25 PM AEST
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Very interesting format! I like it much.
Andrew |
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Re: Double Speak
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by hauntedscorp on
Wednesday, 4th May 2005 @ 05:11:47 PM AEST
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Just when u think it's all been done before....
Excellent write! Cheers! |
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