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Array ( [sid] => 90072 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Deadly Rape [time] => 2005-04-06 02:09:07 [hometext] => Comments Truly Appreciated [bodytext] => See these eyes
Watch they’re lies.
Hear these lips
Listen to they’re tips.

It won’t be long
Before something’s wrong.
You see her,
It’s all a blur.
She sees you,
And knows that its untrue.

See these eyes
Watch they’re lies.
Hear these lips
Listen to they’re tips.

Your love cannot be real,
For its not something that you feel.
At night its more like rape,
She just wants to escape.
Each night it gets worse,
Adding one more curse.

See these eyes
Watch they’re lies.
Hear these lips
Listen to they’re tips.

Yesterday you split her head,
Tonight she might be dead.
She’s on the phone,
Hurting to the bone.
You walk in,
And grab her chin.

See these eyes
Watch they’re lies.
Hear these lips
Listen to they’re tips.

Shoved to her knees,
She starts to beg please.
“Don’t kill me now,
I’m not worth the trouble it’ll sow.”
But you don’t hear,
You’re too busy drinkin’ your beer.

See these eyes
Watch they’re lies.
Hear these lips
Listen to they’re tips.

Now its Sunday morning
And all the papers are warning
There was a murder last night,
Without much of a fight.
For what the cops saw
Left them in grim awe.

See these eyes
Watch they’re lies.
Hear these lips
Listen to they’re tips.

The sight that was seen
Was a girl of eighteen
With a broken head
And a body covered in red.
Her killer was a man
Who was still holding a can.

See these eyes
Watch they’re lies.
Hear these lips
Listen to they’re tips.

He was drunk as it gets
And high on something that wasn’t cigarettes.
He bashed her head
‘Till she was near dead.
Then he looked at her eyes
And told her to say her goodbyes.

See these eyes
Watch they’re lies.
Hear these lips
Listen to they’re tips.

A man killed a girl
Then something started to unfurl
He picked up a knife
And took his life.
The story ends here,
And that, I think is clear. [comments] => 9 [counter] => 559 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Live2Die [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Deadly Rape

Contributed by Live2Die on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 02:09:07 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



See these eyes
Watch they’re lies.
Hear these lips
Listen to they’re tips.

It won’t be long
Before something’s wrong.
You see her,
It’s all a blur.
She sees you,
And knows that its untrue.

See these eyes
Watch they’re lies.
Hear these lips
Listen to they’re tips.

Your love cannot be real,
For its not something that you feel.
At night its more like rape,
She just wants to escape.
Each night it gets worse,
Adding one more curse.

See these eyes
Watch they’re lies.
Hear these lips
Listen to they’re tips.

Yesterday you split her head,
Tonight she might be dead.
She’s on the phone,
Hurting to the bone.
You walk in,
And grab her chin.

See these eyes
Watch they’re lies.
Hear these lips
Listen to they’re tips.

Shoved to her knees,
She starts to beg please.
“Don’t kill me now,
I’m not worth the trouble it’ll sow.”
But you don’t hear,
You’re too busy drinkin’ your beer.

See these eyes
Watch they’re lies.
Hear these lips
Listen to they’re tips.

Now its Sunday morning
And all the papers are warning
There was a murder last night,
Without much of a fight.
For what the cops saw
Left them in grim awe.

See these eyes
Watch they’re lies.
Hear these lips
Listen to they’re tips.

The sight that was seen
Was a girl of eighteen
With a broken head
And a body covered in red.
Her killer was a man
Who was still holding a can.

See these eyes
Watch they’re lies.
Hear these lips
Listen to they’re tips.

He was drunk as it gets
And high on something that wasn’t cigarettes.
He bashed her head
‘Till she was near dead.
Then he looked at her eyes
And told her to say her goodbyes.

See these eyes
Watch they’re lies.
Hear these lips
Listen to they’re tips.

A man killed a girl
Then something started to unfurl
He picked up a knife
And took his life.
The story ends here,
And that, I think is clear.




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Re: Deadly Rape (User Rating: 1 )
by mylady on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 02:30:11 AM AEST
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it sad.. better to leave then get beaten..
It more like a story but sad one .. like it.. But not the tile it should of being... Deadly abuse
rape is a hard thing to go threw and not easy to live with.


Re: Deadly Rape (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 02:39:58 AM AEST
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Sad but well written.
huggs,
emy


Re: Deadly Rape (User Rating: 1 )
by pUnKa_RaCh on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 02:51:10 AM AEST
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it sure is deadly abuse...
heavy stuff and a sad write but u did a job at capturing the tragedy.


Re: Deadly Rape (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 03:25:17 AM AEST
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wow deep stuff you wrote there.
great write.


Re: Deadly Rape (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Wednesday, 6th April 2005 @ 10:41:17 AM AEST
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a very, very deep poem, well expressed,
pix xx


Re: Deadly Rape (User Rating: 1 )
by GurlyTye on Thursday, 7th April 2005 @ 06:17:27 PM AEST
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This brought tears to my eyes. knowing many who have been through simalar experiences without the brutal end. i feel it.


Re: Deadly Rape (User Rating: 1 )
by high_on_duct_tape on Monday, 11th April 2005 @ 05:31:21 PM AEST
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I like how it tells a story - and the chorus separating stanzas. Very descriptive, and deeply emotional. good one!


Re: Deadly Rape (User Rating: 1 )
by SPOKENWORDARTIST on Monday, 16th May 2005 @ 03:02:05 PM AEST
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GREAT WRITE AND VERY POWERFULL AND AWAKENING. TO THOSE WHO WALK THROUGH LIFE SLEEPING FROM WHAT THEY KNOW IS WRONG.BUT SCARED TO CHANGE AND MOVE ON HOPE YOU NEVER WITNESS THIS IN YOUR LIFE..

I WAS MOVED AGAIN GREAT WRITE


Re: Deadly Rape (User Rating: 1 )
by SPOKENWORDARTIST on Tuesday, 21st May 2019 @ 09:41:02 PM AEST
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Very powerful




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