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[aid] => mick
[title] => A Demon Come to Visit Me
[time] => 2005-04-04 21:41:33
[hometext] => To my friend, Rest In Revolution: I wasn't actually there when he killed himself but this is sort of how I imagined I would of reacted if I had been there to stop him-also I'm not too sure the title is proper English lol-Nonners=name
[bodytext] => The sky is black, But it’s only noon, I’ve turned nocturnal, So I can see you walking in the distance, You’re walking upside down, And the sky is your pavement, I wanted to shout your name, “NONNERS NONNERS!” And in that second, It was like I broke the safety of silence, A thousand red eyes, And sharp claws, Came straight at me, Like the spear you jaggedly shoved through my heart, When you held the gun to your head. I curled up in a ball, And closed my eyes real tight, A prayer to help me out, I reached out and opened my eyes, And you were there holding my hand, Your cold touch sent me shivering into A bolt of all the memories you left behind, The light came back and my vision was normal, But you were gone, Yet I can still feel the chill of sadness you left on me. And I will never see you again, Except in pictures, And that day when you touched me, You weren’t sent from heaven, Suicide goes to hell, I was going to grab you, And tell you to put the gun down, But when you knew what I was thinking, The shot was how you vanished and left me here, And I hate you so much for it, Why couldn’t I stop you? You were already dead, A demon come to visit me, Take me back to the past, How could my life end so fast? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 177 [topic] => 32 [informant] => AtomicPromIse [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
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