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[aid] => Mick
[title] => Mommy can you hear me.
[time] => 2002-12-20 18:00:00
[hometext] => A poem I wrote about a news report of a abondoned child.
[bodytext] => This is the news story that inspired me to write "Mommy can you hear me"
The tears filled my eyes as I listened to the news report.
“Sixteen month old little girl found in condemned apartment house.”
It was so unbelievable, I just wanted to turn off the T.V. but I couldn’t.
The reporters’ words haunted me as I continued to listen. It seems as though
the little girls mother had moved in with her boyfriend, who didn’t want any
kids around, so the mother left the little girl alone in the apartment.
She told police during questioning that she would bring food for the little girl
and leave it where the little girl could get it. The last time she stopped in was
almost two weeks before. She had dropped off some peanut butter and jelly sandwiches.
Reports said that the little girl was suffering from malnutrition and that her thumb
had sores on it from being sucked on in attempts to satisfy her hunger .
As the reporter went on to other news, I switched off the T.V. By this time I could
feel the tears streaming down my face, I don’t believe that I had ever felt this way inside.
Though I tried I could not rid myself of this picture in my head of that little girl wandering the rooms of an empty apartment. Hungry and crying for a mother who could not hear her cries. From bedroom to living room to the empty kitchen void of the warmth and good smells of a loving home.
Try as I might I could not rid myself of this picture, of a little girl standing in an empty room crying for the mother who was not there. A sadness over came me as I saw her standing there, as soiled diaper hung loose between her tiny little legs, while she wandered back and forth from room to room until mercifully sleep would overtake the cries of hunger and pain.
I had heard stories about starving children. But this wasn’t a war torn country half way around the world or one filled with famine. This was a story that was becoming all too common. A story that is so unbelievable, that we tell ourselves that it just can’t be true.
Not in this country and this day and time, but alas it is all too true.
As I lay down to sleep that night, I could still hear the cries of that little girl. Cries that will forever haunt me and fill my dreams. And I thought to myself just before I dozed off, What kind of people have we become, when we could allow this to happen to a child.
What kind in deed.
Mommy can you hear me?
Mommy can you hear me
No mommy's not at home
Mommy can you hear me
crying all alone
Mommy can you hear me
calling out your name
Mommy can you hear me
am I the one you blame
Mommy can you hear me
as night it closes in
Mommy can you hear me
and see the shape I'm in
Mommy are you out there
as the shadows fill my walls
Mommy are you out there
to hear my frightened calls
Mommy are you out there
as the tears they fill my eyes
Mommy are you out there
to hear my lonely cries
Mommy will you hug me
and chase away my fears
Mommy will you hold me
and wipe away my tears
Mommy do you love me
or am I just a pest
Mommy do you love me
or are you like the rest
Mommy do you want me
or am I in your way
Mommy do you want me
Oh Lord I hope and pray
Mommy I love you
Please believe me when I say
Mommy I love you
Please don't go away
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[score] => 15
[ratings] => 3
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[topicname] => EmotionalPoetry
)
Mommy can you hear me.
Contributed by
wordsy
on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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This is the news story that inspired me to write "Mommy can you hear me"
The tears filled my eyes as I listened to the news report.
“Sixteen month old little girl found in condemned apartment house.”
It was so unbelievable, I just wanted to turn off the T.V. but I couldn’t.
The reporters’ words haunted me as I continued to listen. It seems as though
the little girls mother had moved in with her boyfriend, who didn’t want any
kids around, so the mother left the little girl alone in the apartment.
She told police during questioning that she would bring food for the little girl
and leave it where the little girl could get it. The last time she stopped in was
almost two weeks before. She had dropped off some peanut butter and jelly sandwiches.
Reports said that the little girl was suffering from malnutrition and that her thumb
had sores on it from being sucked on in attempts to satisfy her hunger .
As the reporter went on to other news, I switched off the T.V. By this time I could
feel the tears streaming down my face, I don’t believe that I had ever felt this way inside.
Though I tried I could not rid myself of this picture in my head of that little girl wandering the rooms of an empty apartment. Hungry and crying for a mother who could not hear her cries. From bedroom to living room to the empty kitchen void of the warmth and good smells of a loving home.
Try as I might I could not rid myself of this picture, of a little girl standing in an empty room crying for the mother who was not there. A sadness over came me as I saw her standing there, as soiled diaper hung loose between her tiny little legs, while she wandered back and forth from room to room until mercifully sleep would overtake the cries of hunger and pain.
I had heard stories about starving children. But this wasn’t a war torn country half way around the world or one filled with famine. This was a story that was becoming all too common. A story that is so unbelievable, that we tell ourselves that it just can’t be true.
Not in this country and this day and time, but alas it is all too true.
As I lay down to sleep that night, I could still hear the cries of that little girl. Cries that will forever haunt me and fill my dreams. And I thought to myself just before I dozed off, What kind of people have we become, when we could allow this to happen to a child.
What kind in deed.
Mommy can you hear me?
Mommy can you hear me
No mommy's not at home
Mommy can you hear me
crying all alone
Mommy can you hear me
calling out your name
Mommy can you hear me
am I the one you blame
Mommy can you hear me
as night it closes in
Mommy can you hear me
and see the shape I'm in
Mommy are you out there
as the shadows fill my walls
Mommy are you out there
to hear my frightened calls
Mommy are you out there
as the tears they fill my eyes
Mommy are you out there
to hear my lonely cries
Mommy will you hug me
and chase away my fears
Mommy will you hold me
and wipe away my tears
Mommy do you love me
or am I just a pest
Mommy do you love me
or are you like the rest
Mommy do you want me
or am I in your way
Mommy do you want me
Oh Lord I hope and pray
Mommy I love you
Please believe me when I say
Mommy I love you
Please don't go away
Copyright ©
wordsy
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2002-12-20 18:00:00]
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Re: Mommy can you hear me.
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by OreO on
Friday, 20th December 2002 @ 06:15:40 PM AEST
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Dear god bring in the puff's tissue, this made me cry so hard...it is so sad that people do things like this for the one that they love....i mean just because her boyfriend didn't want the child around??? c'mon who's worth this???...This is sooooo sad...my god i can't even imagine doing anything like this to one of my children...i can clearly say that i will starve and die before my children go hungry or neglected or anything of this sort....thanks for sharing this one it definately gives one alot to think about in life and it dang well makes one wonder what kind of world this is turning out to be!!!
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Re: Mommy can you hear me.
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by LOWMAN613 on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 12:36:17 AM AEST
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OMG This really tore me up inside,Wait I need to go hug my children!
I cried so hard,HOW COULD THIS BE????
I can't imagine! Your poem was so touching in her honor! Christina |
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Re: Mommy can you hear me.
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by wordsy on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 09:33:55 AM AEST
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Thank you so much for your words of kindness and yes this is a tragedy. I couldn't believe what I was hearing on the T.V.
again thanks,
wordsy. |
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Re: Mommy can you hear me.
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by wordsy on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 09:35:08 AM AEST
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Thank you for your words of kindness. This is horrible.
thanks,
wordsy. |
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Re: Mommy can you hear me.
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Saturday, 21st December 2002 @ 02:41:43 PM AEST
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Wow...how could a woman be so heartless!!! And to her own child..... in favor of a man who doesn't want her child... I can never understand this.... I always say it's the wrong ones sometimes who have kids.... Wordsy, this is sad but a great write.
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Re: Mommy can you hear me.
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by wordsy on
Sunday, 22nd December 2002 @ 12:22:18 AM AEST
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Thank you so very much for your thoughts on my words.
wordsy. |
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Re: Mommy can you hear me.
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by juves_angel on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 07:37:45 AM AEST
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I really loved your poem... I have a feeling we are going to be good friends... Keep up the GREAT work and I'll pray for that little girl...
Mandy |
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Re: Mommy can you hear me.
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by gina on
Thursday, 26th December 2002 @ 08:13:52 AM AEST
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ewwwwwww this is extremely touching , my heart goes 4 that lil girl , *tears in my eyes*
how could she ba such a bad mother !!!!!!
this was beautifully written and sad ......
GINA |
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Re: Mommy can you hear me.
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by lilch4ever on
Saturday, 28th December 2002 @ 12:03:56 AM AEST
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| WoW that was so touching and sad. Its really ashame what people would do to their kids just to be with a man or with someone. No child should have to feel that pain. I could relate in some ways. I really like this poem it was very good and very sad. Nicely written by the way. I hope they find a good home for that lilttle girl. |
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by gery_giggles on
Sunday, 20th April 2003 @ 10:27:55 AM AEST
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| this peom was so good that i almost cried i don't know how anyone could do such a thing. |
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Re: Mommy can you hear me.
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by MX on
Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 11:52:20 PM AEST
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| tears...so good so good. |
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