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Array ( [sid] => 89458 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => There Is No Pride In Victory [time] => 2005-03-31 10:44:53 [hometext] => [bodytext] => It was a risky move
But you accomplished it
You have managed to make me
Fall head over heels
Into misery

How much is your smile worth to me
When you have given it to everybody
It doesn't mean anythinhg
So keep your love to yourself

You may have won the battle
But Im winning the war
Because once you realize
You let the goood one go
You will be crawling back
Crying to me
I should have known
I should have known

And if I would have known
That love hurts this bad
I would have never told you
I love you so

Is it supposed to feel like this
Tell it to me straight and true
If I would have known how sad love is
I never would have fell in love with you

How does it make you feel
Seeing me on my knees
My head in my hands
And begging you to please
See it my way
Then I will just let it be

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There Is No Pride In Victory

Contributed by alexb on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 10:44:53 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

It was a risky move
But you accomplished it
You have managed to make me
Fall head over heels
Into misery

How much is your smile worth to me
When you have given it to everybody
It doesn't mean anythinhg
So keep your love to yourself

You may have won the battle
But Im winning the war
Because once you realize
You let the goood one go
You will be crawling back
Crying to me
I should have known
I should have known

And if I would have known
That love hurts this bad
I would have never told you
I love you so

Is it supposed to feel like this
Tell it to me straight and true
If I would have known how sad love is
I never would have fell in love with you

How does it make you feel
Seeing me on my knees
My head in my hands
And begging you to please
See it my way
Then I will just let it be

Copyright © alexb ... [ 2005-03-31 10:44:53]
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Re: There Is No Pride In Victory (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 11:30:26 PM AEST
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I liked this. The whole thing goes really well, even though the end kind of did a 180. Great write. (^_^)b

Re: There Is No Pride In Victory (User Rating: 1 )
by vox on Saturday, 6th August 2005 @ 06:14:28 PM AEST
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it was really well spoken. you said alot with this poem. very deep meanings.

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