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Array ( [sid] => 89344 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => destructive [time] => 2005-03-30 14:55:29 [hometext] => i mess my life up myself,iam in this mess because i did it myself,please read and learn from my mistakes,but you wont be that stupid... [bodytext] => it started of well
my life in this world
i was brilliant
i was good at school
i made new friends
ok i was a little on the down side
my family going through bad times
my dad having an affair
my mum having a break down
but i pulled through
i didnt let that effect me
i didnt think it would
...but somehow it did
when my dad moved to canada
i felt alone
i hated him
but i needed him
as a dad
to control me
after that i took advantadge of my mum
she loved me too much
and let me off with more
i started drinking
smoking
anything i could do i would
i had a boyfriend
that was new
i didnt think anyone would like me
but i got carried away
iam only fourteen
and ive had sex twice
with different people
ste* was my first,but that didnt last
he jibbed me after i cheated on him with ben*
but ben* didnt know
and i started going out with him
same thing happened
but i was stupid
i didnt use protection
and i started to worry
my life could end
i could have a baby
so i had to take the pill
my mum didnt know
but bens* dad found out
i dont know how he will react
but i got back with ste*
and im still with ben*
and i have to choice between them
I DONT KNOW WHAT TO DO
I NEED HELP
ADVISE
SOMETHING
PLEASE ANYONE TELL ME WHAT TO DO
I NEED YOUR HELP
I NEED IT PLEASE PLEASE!!
iam destructive
so many promises ive broken
so many mistakes ive made
iam a slut
and no-one can denie it
iam
i do what you tell me to
id get down and lick your shoes
iam a toy
i let you play with me
now i need some help
i need some advise
i need to get out of this cycle of destruction
learn from me
dont mess your life up
because you mess others up with it
iam the master of destruction
id move out my way if i was you
because iam coming through
to destroy you...

(please comment i need some advise so badly please...im desperate....)
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destructive

Contributed by Hannah_Heaven on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 02:55:29 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

it started of well
my life in this world
i was brilliant
i was good at school
i made new friends
ok i was a little on the down side
my family going through bad times
my dad having an affair
my mum having a break down
but i pulled through
i didnt let that effect me
i didnt think it would
...but somehow it did
when my dad moved to canada
i felt alone
i hated him
but i needed him
as a dad
to control me
after that i took advantadge of my mum
she loved me too much
and let me off with more
i started drinking
smoking
anything i could do i would
i had a boyfriend
that was new
i didnt think anyone would like me
but i got carried away
iam only fourteen
and ive had sex twice
with different people
ste* was my first,but that didnt last
he jibbed me after i cheated on him with ben*
but ben* didnt know
and i started going out with him
same thing happened
but i was stupid
i didnt use protection
and i started to worry
my life could end
i could have a baby
so i had to take the pill
my mum didnt know
but bens* dad found out
i dont know how he will react
but i got back with ste*
and im still with ben*
and i have to choice between them
I DONT KNOW WHAT TO DO
I NEED HELP
ADVISE
SOMETHING
PLEASE ANYONE TELL ME WHAT TO DO
I NEED YOUR HELP
I NEED IT PLEASE PLEASE!!
iam destructive
so many promises ive broken
so many mistakes ive made
iam a slut
and no-one can denie it
iam
i do what you tell me to
id get down and lick your shoes
iam a toy
i let you play with me
now i need some help
i need some advise
i need to get out of this cycle of destruction
learn from me
dont mess your life up
because you mess others up with it
iam the master of destruction
id move out my way if i was you
because iam coming through
to destroy you...

(please comment i need some advise so badly please...im desperate....)

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Re: destructive (User Rating: 1 )
by THUGGIN4REAL on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 03:21:02 PM AEST
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things do indeed change , but its alright. many can learn from mistakes, regardless what people think , you have a heart and no matter how people feel about you , skies the limit. nice write

Re: destructive (User Rating: 1 )
by blue_angel on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 03:22:08 PM AEST
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wow, that is a very personal piece... and you asked for advice. well i have a friend in a similar situation. i think what you need is something else to live for, a passion, something that you can really enjoy doing. really, im no dr phil and im not the best at giving advice, but it seems that you did this to yourself. you need some self respect, set some standards, clean yourself up. i really dont think im helping at all am i? well i think you're a great writer and ur honest about yourself which is a good thing, you dont deny it. if you want to talk you can pm me netime, i hope you figure things out...
sending luv, hope, lotsa hugs
jennie*

Re: destructive (User Rating: 1 )
by disturbed_silence on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 03:56:14 PM AEST
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i believe that no one can change but they ca improve. i believe you can improve because you accept thta you've made some mistakes in your life. please if you want you can contact me at smartgirlsaremean@hotmail.com

P.S:i'm 14 years old..gonna be 15 in may

Re: destructive (User Rating: 1 )
by brokengirl on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 04:03:00 PM AEST
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You cant change the past all you can do is learn from it and not make the same mistakes again. All you can do now is live with and deal with the consequences. I pray that it all ends up allright.
-hailey

Re: destructive (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 05:25:46 PM AEST
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Very hontest write. Dont beat your self up, we cant change our past , but we can ,one day at a time, make our today's and future better. No one is perfect we all have our demons to battle . dont give up and love your self

Re: destructive (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Thursday, 31st March 2005 @ 07:16:09 AM AEST
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many people including myself will totally relate to this poem. we all make mistakes, and we all learn by them. a good write, well written,
pix xx

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