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Array ( [sid] => 89275 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Misery: Drink and Drived [time] => 2005-03-29 22:57:50 [hometext] => this is my last poem in the Misery Series [bodytext] => The Misery: Drink and Drived
I feel upon me,
The shadow of death.
It fills the air with fear,
It takes away my breath.
The screetching of tires,
The feeling of fear.
Gave me a hint,
Death was near.
Exploding glass,
The screaming of shock.
I felt nothing but pain,
As I fell like a rock.
Both cars stop,
A feeling of hell.
I went to check,
If they were well.
I looked at the driver,
Blood on his face.
He did not survive,
This terrible place.
Back seat was a child,
No older than three.
Her life is no more,
All because of me.
I fell to my nees.
I fell to the ground.
I saw the ambulance,
As it came around.
A three year old girl,
Died because I drank.
She has no more life,
And just me to thank.
With tears in her eyes,
The mother arrived.
Horror on her face,
Becaue I drank and drived.
She ran towards the car,
She ran through me instead.
Then I finaly realized,
That I am dead.
I can't tell her what happened,
I can't go home and see my wife.
All because I drank and drived,
I just ended my life.


--Evan L.--

more of my poetry at: http://thepoemsofsorrow.com [comments] => 2 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 39 [informant] => thepos [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )
The Misery: Drink and Drived

Contributed by thepos on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 10:57:50 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief



The Misery: Drink and Drived
I feel upon me,
The shadow of death.
It fills the air with fear,
It takes away my breath.
The screetching of tires,
The feeling of fear.
Gave me a hint,
Death was near.
Exploding glass,
The screaming of shock.
I felt nothing but pain,
As I fell like a rock.
Both cars stop,
A feeling of hell.
I went to check,
If they were well.
I looked at the driver,
Blood on his face.
He did not survive,
This terrible place.
Back seat was a child,
No older than three.
Her life is no more,
All because of me.
I fell to my nees.
I fell to the ground.
I saw the ambulance,
As it came around.
A three year old girl,
Died because I drank.
She has no more life,
And just me to thank.
With tears in her eyes,
The mother arrived.
Horror on her face,
Becaue I drank and drived.
She ran towards the car,
She ran through me instead.
Then I finaly realized,
That I am dead.
I can't tell her what happened,
I can't go home and see my wife.
All because I drank and drived,
I just ended my life.


--Evan L.--

more of my poetry at: http://thepoemsofsorrow.com




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Re: The Misery: Drink and Drived (User Rating: 1 )
by freckle on Tuesday, 29th March 2005 @ 11:19:23 PM AEST
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The poem is good....it reminds me of another one told by a teenager's view point. Good write though and of course we can never hear the don't drink and drive message enough! Thanks for sharing.

Carol


Re: The Misery: Drink and Drived (User Rating: 1 )
by dragonfly1979 on Wednesday, 30th March 2005 @ 01:14:44 AM AEST
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I think maybe there are a lot of people out there that should read this. Very raw and to the point.




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