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Array ( [sid] => 89068 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Still In My Mind [time] => 2005-03-28 14:19:58 [hometext] => *my best friend, who has lost contact for a while, wrote a poem and this is my reply to it* [bodytext] => I Hope You Are Happier Hun,
I Hope You Know Not To Run.
I Hope You Let People Show,
Cause Its Your Time To Glow.

I Hope Your Broken Heart,
Has A Little Restart.
I Hope We Are Soon Talking Again,
Yet, Neither Of Us Know When.

I Hope We Are Back In Contact By That Special Day,
Remember Its The Saturday.
A Year Ago We Said Hi.
Now I Just Cannot Say Bye!

Your Are The Best Ever Friend,
I Hope Your Here Till My End.
You Are SOOO Much To Me,
But I Don't Think You Can See.

I'm Sure You Know I Miss You,
And I'm Always Thinking Of You.

When I Get Up, Your On My Mind.
Through The Day, Your On My Mind.
When I Go To Bed, Your On My Mind.
So, Now You Know.. I Think Of You At Least Once A Day.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 173 [topic] => 52 [informant] => BuggY [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => goodbyepoetry )

Still In My Mind

Contributed by BuggY on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 02:19:58 PM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry

I Hope You Are Happier Hun,
I Hope You Know Not To Run.
I Hope You Let People Show,
Cause Its Your Time To Glow.

I Hope Your Broken Heart,
Has A Little Restart.
I Hope We Are Soon Talking Again,
Yet, Neither Of Us Know When.

I Hope We Are Back In Contact By That Special Day,
Remember Its The Saturday.
A Year Ago We Said Hi.
Now I Just Cannot Say Bye!

Your Are The Best Ever Friend,
I Hope Your Here Till My End.
You Are SOOO Much To Me,
But I Don't Think You Can See.

I'm Sure You Know I Miss You,
And I'm Always Thinking Of You.

When I Get Up, Your On My Mind.
Through The Day, Your On My Mind.
When I Go To Bed, Your On My Mind.
So, Now You Know.. I Think Of You At Least Once A Day.

Copyright © BuggY ... [ 2005-03-28 14:19:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Still In My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 02:23:18 PM AEST
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sweet I hope u let ur friend read this! I'm sure they'll Love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Re: Still In My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 03:09:12 PM AEST
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well done , thanks for sharing

Re: Still In My Mind (User Rating: 1 )
by JacobsKK on Monday, 28th March 2005 @ 03:36:04 PM AEST
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Try to work on creating a better syllable flow, it will help the meaning of the poem. But overall, it was good.
-JacobsKK

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