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she see's no need to live.
She wanders for affection,
but no one seems to give.

She travels an overwhelming road,
to which there is no end.
She wants to be with others,
but with them she cannot blend.

She wilts away in silence,
and no one seems to care.
She wants someone to help her,
but she thinks that no one's there.

Then she see's a growing light,
and a hand comes from the sky.
He grabs her hand and helps her,
and teaches her to fly.

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Is She Alone

Contributed by mini_mexico on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 02:07:19 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

The light within her weakens,
she see's no need to live.
She wanders for affection,
but no one seems to give.

She travels an overwhelming road,
to which there is no end.
She wants to be with others,
but with them she cannot blend.

She wilts away in silence,
and no one seems to care.
She wants someone to help her,
but she thinks that no one's there.

Then she see's a growing light,
and a hand comes from the sky.
He grabs her hand and helps her,
and teaches her to fly.

Copyright © mini_mexico ... [ 2005-03-23 02:07:19]
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Re: Is She Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Jessicahodge on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 02:43:15 AM AEST
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I really enjoyed your poem. It is something that I can relate to. For i fell in love and he taught me how to fly.

Re: Is She Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 02:47:29 AM AEST
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A masterpeice of beauty.
huggs,
emy

Re: Is She Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by mina-1 on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 05:54:55 AM AEST
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A truly inspiring poem. A beautiful master piece.
Hugs,
Sue

Re: Is She Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Tanmaya on Wednesday, 23rd March 2005 @ 09:00:15 AM AEST
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Truely, God alone can set us free.
A beautiful and inspiring write this is... simple and powerful at the same time.
What a wonderful note it ends on- filled with new hope and promise.

Well done.

Re: Is She Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 27th March 2005 @ 12:25:38 AM AEST
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I think this is a beautiful poem, it has touched and inspired me..........

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