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Array ( [sid] => 88351 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Blue [time] => 2005-03-22 14:19:59 [hometext] => what can I say, some people's eyes just make me wanna write a poem... [bodytext] => Innocence is overrated
but when I see it in your eyes
doesn’t matter if it’s true or false
just want to sink like a stone
in that eyes of yours.
Like glowing light through a tick glass
your eyes spark.
Unattainable color rising from a dark
grabbing every inch of my heart.
Neither pale blue heaven,
nor a deep blue sea,
nor a shallow waters of a sandy beach.
Neither turquoise stone
nor an azure tiles on a Tuscan kitchen floor,
neither indigo of a distant Irish shore.
Neither cobalt of a Greek window at noon,
nor a pastel horizon of a seaside afternoon.
They are not the blue of a divine Byzantine sky
nor washed out denim shirt of mine.
Neither ray of light through a stained-glass,
nor a dim stormy cloud.
Countless words I could apply
craving to depict your eyes.
I’m seeking in vain to put in terms
what’s the shade of an innocent smile.
The trouble is:
that kind of blue lives only in you
I could strive forever,
struggle infinitely to sound clever.
watch closely for every peace
of this planet blue,
and maybe then
I’ll find the shade that hides in you.
At the end some fine lines will get it right,
but I wouldn’t dare to try or even explain why
I love the rest of you.
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Blue

Contributed by enamat on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 02:19:59 PM in AEST
Topic: fantasy



Innocence is overrated
but when I see it in your eyes
doesn’t matter if it’s true or false
just want to sink like a stone
in that eyes of yours.
Like glowing light through a tick glass
your eyes spark.
Unattainable color rising from a dark
grabbing every inch of my heart.
Neither pale blue heaven,
nor a deep blue sea,
nor a shallow waters of a sandy beach.
Neither turquoise stone
nor an azure tiles on a Tuscan kitchen floor,
neither indigo of a distant Irish shore.
Neither cobalt of a Greek window at noon,
nor a pastel horizon of a seaside afternoon.
They are not the blue of a divine Byzantine sky
nor washed out denim shirt of mine.
Neither ray of light through a stained-glass,
nor a dim stormy cloud.
Countless words I could apply
craving to depict your eyes.
I’m seeking in vain to put in terms
what’s the shade of an innocent smile.
The trouble is:
that kind of blue lives only in you
I could strive forever,
struggle infinitely to sound clever.
watch closely for every peace
of this planet blue,
and maybe then
I’ll find the shade that hides in you.
At the end some fine lines will get it right,
but I wouldn’t dare to try or even explain why
I love the rest of you.




Copyright © enamat ... [ 2005-03-22 14:19:59]
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Re: Blue (User Rating: 1 )
by bigtig6269 on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 02:39:19 PM AEST
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Great post. Very vivid details. I know a few girls with eyes like that and they just make me melt. Keep em coming


Re: Blue (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 22nd March 2005 @ 06:40:46 PM AEST
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wow, what a beautiful choice of words, i love this poem!!




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